love when you love
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when you go,
leave while i’m still asleep
and
shut the door
quietly
.
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when you come
(bring with you
the fire of fairy tale dragons)
stay
when it storms outside
dream
when you dream
(flutter the sky
with magic dust
and hang rainbows
at nights)
make me your home
when you’re homeless
go
when you go
(take with you
confetti of dragonfly wings)
later
when
you build
your own nest
make sure
it is
too far from me
to
come
when you come
Lisa Jewell
Loving imagery….
Tender and of so beautiful. xx
mimi yoon replied
thank you, beautiful lisa… : ) xxx
Outdoors2
Mimi
you Dear are a song bird
xo
mimi yoon replied
i was lying down on my esthetician’s bed earlier today(well, yesterday now)... my face completely covered with mud… and i heard a bird chirping these words to me… ;P
thank you dear roy… xoxo
silverstrummer...
Hi mimi – There is definately a statement being made here …........ a feeling of being used in the name of “love” and the love is only one sided and such a great ultimatum -
“when you build
your own nest
make sure
it is too far from me”
I love how you have laid out your words also the following statement is brilliant too –
“when you go,
leave while i’m still asleep
and shut the door quietly”
Beautifully written and to the point! – David
mimi yoon replied
hi david…. so happy to see you…. yes, it can be read as a statement of such… or not… : )
thank you so kindly, david… : )
Cassey
Everything you create is so pretty. You’re incredibly talented and I love visiting your works.
mimi yoon replied
very sweet cassidy… and i love it when you visit… thank you dear…. : )
hugh023
As always, lovely words. . .
mimi yoon replied
and as always, i appreciate you, hugh… thank you~ : )
Larasolnishko
I feel beautiful freedom after reading your verses, as if two wings bring me hight into sky…
mimi yoon replied
what beautiful words, lara…. and when you’re tired from flying, stop by and rest for awhile… thank you so dearly… : )
Dominic Melfi
May yhe black raven, killer of dragonflies,never cast a shadow over you.
mimi yoon replied
thank you dominic…. i’ve never touched a dragonfly before(i saw the most gorgeous fiery red dragonfly a couple of days ago).... butterflies either… : )
Keith Reesor
Lovely writing Mimi!! :)
mimi yoon replied
hi keith… thank you so much… : )
Leon Walker
Another marvelous piece of work Mimi!!!
mimi yoon replied
thank you leon…. i appreciate your compliment greatly…. : )
kjgordon
so tender and loving…......with much aloha….......
mimi yoon replied
thank you so kindly, kj… appreciate your much aloha… : )
Farras Abdelnour
beautiful and touching work, mimi. it’s as if your poems and paintings are merely tips of icebergs – beautifully worked and sculptured-, with so much to tell.
mimi yoon replied
and i just love your comments…. as if you read me…. thank you so dearly, farras… : )
rjcolby
Thank you so much for your wonderful writing. You take my breath away, far away.
mimi yoon replied
no, rj…. i thank you.... and so dearly…. : )
Mikyle
You are from another realm mimi. x
mimi yoon replied
that’s huge, mikyle… thank you so kindly… xx
MrTAH
What if he never leaves? A wonderful writer you are…...
mimi yoon replied
your words mean much to me, tobey… thank you…. : )
Chris Baker
A breathe of utter romanticism – purring , meandering – yet also bitten and coveted by experience…. a joy to read and cling onto ;)
mimi yoon replied
you, truly multitalented artist, are quite a wordsmith…. endless with surprises… thank you so kindly chris… : )
wasy35
thoughtful, home when you are homeless, wonderful.
BiographyofRed8
in its simplicity it is like a warm hug.. the words light as fairy dust, weaving and wonderful..
tarawilson
this is absolutely stunning writing – love this.
musbah alkbir
l like come MIMI… lovely writing