he keeps me

mimi yoon
Author: mimi yoon
Word Count: 35
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in rain
he comes
in silence
he keeps me

i know

with rain
he comes
with hollowness
he shapes my heart

i know

i’ve seen him
only through
the curtain
of rain

i know

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Sheer magic. xx

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you erika… xxx

  • Lisa Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    wonderful feeling…..you’ve conveyed it so beautifully….xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you beautiful… xxx

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    blissful…. i know

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you dearly…. i know, jim

  • frenchblue

    frenchblue

    beautiful words mimi….cm x

  • mimi yoon replied

    thanks much, cm… xxx

  • Outdoors2

    Outdoors2

    Undeniable Fantastical Whimsical and Magical
    and a Spectacle of Beautiful too Mimi ..xo

  • mimi yoon replied

    you tickle me, mr. lion and a paw… thank you… xoxo

  • girlinthestars

    girlinthestars

    really softly, lovely.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you kindly, amy… : )

  • Chris Baker

    Chris Baker

    An enchanting vision of hope, distance & familiarity – lovely Mimi :)

  • mimi yoon replied

    beautiful comment, chris…. i thank you very much… : )

  • JKKimball

    JKKimball

    words have such beauty Mimi!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much for your kind words, john… : )

  • Patricia Anne McCarty

    Patricia Anne ...

    very cool writing :)

  • mimi yoon replied

    cool like a cat… love your tiger avatar… thank you much, patricia… : )

  • Leon Walker

    Leon Walker

    You’re an amazing talent Mimi… This is very nicely presented.

  • mimi yoon replied

    and you are too kind, leon… i appreciate you… : )

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so~ much, rhena… : )

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice one Mimi…

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you very much, gregory… : )

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Wonderfully enchanting writing Mimi!! :)

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so dearly, keith… you’re very kind… : )

  • Estelle O'Brien

    Estelle O'Brien

    Mimi I have never met anyone like you (cyber met, I mean) whose words affect me as much as your beautiful poetry. Pure magic. xx

  • mimi yoon replied

    you are making me tear…. thank you soooooo sooooooo dearly, estelle…. your words are heartfelt…. xxxxx

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    a dream feeling but also an absolute knowing that he is there….that is feeling that moved me in this sincere verse..it still lingers even when the words have stopped…pitter patter, pitter patter like the rainXX

  • mimi yoon replied

    pitter patter, pitter patter…. it’s always raining in my heart….
    thank you for your beautiful words, karen…. thank you dearly… xxx

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    aloha wahini….....I was directed to your profile…....excellent artist and writer you are…...I look forward to viewing more….......

  • mimi yoon replied

    aloha kj… thank you so kindly, and please come by often…. i appreciate you and the one who’s directed you to me… greetings from oc, cali… : )

  • Euan Thorburn

    Euan Thorburn

    you been in the shower again!!
    beautiful mimi!!
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • Patricia Anne McCarty

    Patricia Anne ...

  • Trijpmaker

    Trijpmaker

    nice one..
    but do a spell check..
    there are grammar errors

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