this circle

he brings
the wind
and the dreams

[the dreams gather in the shadow of secrets]

and the dreams
and the song

[the song resonates and the world fades]

and the song
and the wind

[the wind brings him]

  • Sam Dantone

    Sam Dantone

    and again…

    Sam Dantone

  • mimi yoon replied

    ...and agian… thank you sam… : )

  • jenseyes

    jenseyes

    wonderful mimi

  • mimi yoon replied

    thanxxx jen… x

  • Michael Scholl

    Michael Scholl

    how beautiful, mimi.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you much, mike… : )

  • Jordan Busson

    Jordan Busson

    What can I say, friend? You have stolen my words away from me. This is beautiful in its simplicity.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you dearly, jordan… x

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Beautiful....as always. X

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, erika… xx

  • Impassioned

    Impassioned

    Beautiful Mimi ;)

  • mimi yoon replied

    hi mark~ thank you dearly… : )

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Stunning Mimi!!!!!!!!!!!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, rhena…. : ) : ) : ) : )

  • LoriSmaltz

    LoriSmaltz

    beautiful brevity in words

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so~ kindly, lori… appreciate your words… : )

  • coppertrees

    coppertrees

    Awesome Mimi

  • mimi yoon replied

    why, thank you so much, vickie…. : ) : ) : )

  • Barbara Glatzeder
  • mimi yoon replied

    xxxxx dear friend…

  • Jen Cannella

    Jen Cannella

    simply beautiful!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so so much, jen… : )

  • Farras Abdelnour

    Farras Abdelnour

    [the dreams gather in the shadow of secrets] – mimi, this line will echo in my head for a long long time to come. as beautiful as it is magical…

  • mimi yoon replied

    you leave the most beautiful compliments, farras… very touching… thank you dearly… : )

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    I walked into work this morning with the wind blowing all around me and music pumping in my ears….it felt really comforting (now I think I know why).....

    Gorgeous poem Darling Mimi xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    hi beautiful lisa…. sounds like you may be having a better week (and i hope so).... i’ve turned on the fan and turned up the volume on the boombox…. your way…. thank you dearly… xxx

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Oh babe,

    I hope your week improves…..I always find that music helps….even when I want to sit and rock back and forward, crying…..

    xoxox

  • mimi yoon replied

    xoxoxoxo

  • hugh023

    hugh023

    And the cycle continues. . . Fantastic Mimi, such brevity of words but depth of imagery. . .

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, hugh… yes~ : )

  • ozjami

    ozjami

    Very romantic and mystical !!LOve it !!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you for the beautiful comment, james… : )

  • linaji

    linaji

    This goes right along with this great feeling I have had all day Mimi.. ummmmm

  • mimi yoon replied

    yay~ hope you keep that feeling, lina…. thank you for the smile (you just put one on me)... : ) xx

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    Mimi, this is probably one of my favorites of yours… so beautiful and succinct.. it took me somewhere (and believe me, i needed to go there!) xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    so happy to hear that… and so happy to see you again, pj… thank you dear friend… xxx

  • Jo Hawkins

    Jo Hawkins

    It makes you float on a cloud of dreams….

  • mimi yoon replied

    that sounds beautiful, jo… thank you so~ much… : )

  • Songwriter

    Songwriter

    Gorgeous! :0) Song

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you dearly, song…. : ) x

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty
  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you gregory… : )

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    so lovely, and the parenthesis lines were totally mindblowingly enigmatic. You are sheer starshine.

  • mimi yoon replied

    starshine… : ) i am beautiful and perfect, my conceit pills tell me…
    thanxxx jamie… : )

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Delightful!! :)

  • Euan  Thorburn

    Euan Thorburn

    fabbo mimi
    and what gorgeous typography
    xxxxxxxx

  • Del Millar

    Del Millar

    a lovely piece Mimi x

  • liliana

    liliana

    So smooth and gentle…simply beautiful…

  • Clare Colins

    Clare Colins

    Mimi…what a beautiful little poem….congratulations :) I have just posted the perfect photo image for you if you would like to use it….clare

  • Songwriter

    Songwriter

    Mimi this is so simple it’s complex. I love it. Favorite. :0) Song

  • MaggieSummers

    MaggieSummers

    Beautiful:) xoxox

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, maggie… : ) xo

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