dance

mimi yoon
Author: mimi yoon
Word Count: 120
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dance in the morning…
caramel and porcelain hills
trace of valleys dreamed
continues down the hollow of her neck
under the silk
under the satin
and watch the sun rise
behind his back
the spectators greet

dance at sunset…
fiery ruby curtain falls
molten amber stages
burning passion
under her flirty chiffon
glow in wine outlines her thighs
and he drinks it
as the sun drowns
in the small of her back
the spectators blush

dance when the rain comes…
see through secrets
one breath shared
and wet
rain falls between her breasts
onto his jawline
and down to their ankles
he pulls her closer
and drown as one
the spectators rush home
to embrace their lovers

  • Lisa Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Oh my that is a dance in the rain I’d like to be doing…

    Another beautiful and sensual piece….I love…xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    i’m a bit embarrassed and blushing…. ;P
    thank you sweetie~ xxxxx

  • Lynsye Medalia

    Lynsye Medalia

    :) Shivers and tears in my eyes…...you have such beautiful imagery!

  • mimi yoon replied

    a big hug and a kiss, lynsye… thank you so much… : )

  • Lisa Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Never be embarrassed by your sensuality…it is part of your beauty…xx

  • mimi yoon replied

    xoxoxoxoxoxo

  • Symmetry45

    Symmetry45

    What, being a great artist wasn’t enough, now you have to be just as good a writer? Show off!

    This is fantastic beautiful one.

  • mimi yoon replied

    show off~ but i would too… if i looked like you, steve ; )
    thank you so so so~ much steve…. you are the sweetest… xxx

  • bev langby

    bev langby

    Just gorgeous Mimi

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you dearly, bev… : )

  • Leon Walker

    Leon Walker

    This is another marvelous piece of writing Mimi!!!! Brava!!!

  • mimi yoon replied

    leon, your compliments mean so much… thank you so dearly… : )

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB

    soft and beautiful! reminds me of one of my favourite Cohen songs, dance me to the end of love… :)

  • mimi yoon replied

    mmm… yes, one of my favorites too… so happy to hear that this remind you of that beautiful and sexy song… thank you so so so~ much, jennifer… : ) x

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    This is the most perfect dance! Bet there’s nothing as gorgeous as this on Dancing With the Stars.

  • mimi yoon replied

    you are the sweetest, cassidy… thank you so so dearly…. : ) : ) : )

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    Mimi this is an absolutely gorgeous rain dace of love…..like you….
    “buring passion
    under her flirty chiffon”
    beautiful….X

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you for your beautiful words… you beautiful lady…. a big phat kiss… xxxxx

  • Euan Thorburn

    Euan Thorburn

    wonderful!!!
    you should put out a book mimi
    and you design it
    xxxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    do you know any publishers? yes~ that would be a dream come true…
    thank you so much, euan… : ) xx

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    this is so beautiful piece mimi! love this!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, dear ushna… : ) xx

  • nancy salamouny

    nancy salamouny

    i always thought how sensual and beautiful your piantings are, its no wonder you can write such a sensual and beautiful piece mimi!

  • mimi yoon replied

    very sweet of you… thought your latest pieces were quite sensual too… thank you so much, nancy… i appreciate you dearly… : )

  • DanaMS

    DanaMS

    wow… breathtaking Mimi.. xxoxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    yes, ms. night owl… i do notice you up quite late… very late… ;P
    thank you so dearly~ xoxoxo

  • veritasunsaid

    veritasunsaid

    wwwooooowwww….
    this is amazing mimi; 2 seperate lines made me melt
    ‘one breath shared’ and ‘drown as one’ – true passion, true beauty
    i love it:)
    x

  • mimi yoon replied

    i am impressed with myself for making you melt…
    thank you for your beautiful words and thank you for melting with my words, alex… : ) x

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    Oh to have a dance like this…..burning passion Mimi…..glow in wine outlines her thighs
    and he drinks it…....beautiful beauty…............)(

  • mimi yoon replied

    the spectators blushed and rushed home to embrace their lovers…
    thank you tobey… )(

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    you are a writer…...a gifted soul…....

  • mimi yoon replied

    you flatter me… again… )(

  • Larasolnishko

    Larasolnishko

    Mimi, mimi, mimi…..it is rain drops calling you outside… to dance with sunset and sing with evening birds and fly on the wing of love to the far away countries….

  • mimi yoon replied

    yes… yes… yes, lara… i dream and dream and dream…
    thank you so dearly for your beau~ tiful words… xxx

  • Geoff Coleman - Landscapes

    Geoff Coleman...

    Now THAT is a dance! Brilliantly sensual and tres erotique mon amis – blush away lol but keep on writing marvels like this – more, more!!

  • mimi yoon replied

    i thank you for your kindness, geoff… thank you so so dearly….. : )

  • Bob Williams

    Bob Williams

    I wished I were there.

  • mimi yoon replied

    haha… me too, bob…. thank you so so much~ : )

  • Patricia Anne McCarty

    Patricia Anne ...

  • mimi yoon replied

    patricia, thank you so much for the honor… : ) xxx

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Whoa…Mimi….I’m quite speechless…..this is just sublime! What a dance!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you erika…. your words mean much to me…. : )

  • silverstrummer - David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    A dancers lament embraced in a sensual grip of their embrace …........ Just beautiful poetry Mimi as always your talents shine through on cloudy days and brighten up the skies! I tip my cap Ma’am to acknowledge such beautiful work! Congratulations also on your feature – David

  • mimi yoon replied

    you are the sweetest, david…. thank you so so so so so~ much…. : ) x

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Beautifully lyrical in it’s beauty. The words just flow so effortlessly. Amazing writing.
    An absolute fav!! Congrats on a most deserving feature.

  • mimi yoon replied

    and your comment is beautiful too…. thank you dearly, rhena…. : )

  • littlestmonkey

    littlestmonkey

    I love this…..the imagery is outstanding…...excellent….and congrats on your feature it is well deserved!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much for the compliment, littlest monkey (love that name)... :P

  • Szamuch

    Szamuch

    Ah, what an ending :-)

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dance, dream, love, morning, rain and sunset