she's a bird in a cage...
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! ♥♥All About Hearts♥♥ !, Complex Simplicity of Art, ! 100% !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art Inspired by Dreams, Back In Black ( sorry~NO PHOTOGRAPHY), Bits and Pieces , California Sound , Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Women, First Things, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, Imperfectly, in-between, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Midnight Ramblers, Practising the Dark Arts, Real Men Wear Tights , Shameless Self-Promotion, Something To Say, The beauty of poetry, THE SISTERHOOD, The true beauty, Up & Coming Writers, Western United States Artists and Photographers, WMG and Woman Appreciationshe’s a bird in a cage
not of wooden bars
nor of iron rods
but of golden wires
and of golden leaflets
she’s a bird in a cage
and sits by her
on the side table
is a jeweled tiara
that shines her beauty
and crowns her power
she’s a bird in a cage
not trapped
but locked in
and the lock to the door
which she has locked
is inside the cage
locked in with her
and her jeweled tiara
she’s a bird in a cage
she’s opened the door
and flown free once
or may be twice
over the ocean
and to the heaven’s gate
even a daydream or two
on the heaven’s clouds
she’s a bird in a cage
not trapped
nor locked in
but simply sitting there
with her door closed shut
and the key
never to be found
giovanni
a gentle tenderness as i walked thru this poem…
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, giovanni… i missed your comments(but i know you’ve been fav-ing… thank you) ... : )
Lisa Jewell
Oh my…..the imagery you’ve conjured with eloquence is palpable
A stunning and memorable piece my Darling.. xxx
mimi yoon replied
sometimes, i feel as if i write just to read your beautiful comments… thank you beautiful… xxxxx
Wayne Pearson
I love this, we can all be caught up , or we can be free to just BE.
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, wayne… yes… you’re completely 100% right… : )
Leon Walker
You do magnificent work Mimi…
mimi yoon replied
thank you very kindly, leon… : )
Outdoors2
Mimi, you hold the key
This is so sweet
just because…xo
mimi yoon replied
i am the key… and the lock… and the cage… and the bird…. and even the tiara…
thanks roy~ : )
Keith Reesor
Wonderful writing Mimi!! :)
mimi yoon replied
thank you very much, keith… : )
Rhenastarr
Beautifully written, touching and eloquent!!
mimi yoon replied
your words are very encouraging, rhena… thank you so dearly… : )
silverstrummer...
I think this is just one happy little bird that is so content with her life! – David
mimi yoon replied
content with a void… thank you dearly, david… : )
JKKimball
Beautiful work Mimi!
as always!
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, john… always… : )
ArcadiaTempest
The idea of being in a cage and having the free will to come and go…...maybe the cage is not so much a cage to keep one captured but to simply be in….. It felt like a freedom expressed in this whilst acknowledging the parts of our world that we just ‘have to do’.....really expressive piece. Your creativeness always makes me smile….XX
mimi yoon replied
it’s a cage with an unlocked doors that can be locked and unlocked from inside… the freedom is all hers… but she chooses to sit inside… you are beautiful as your written works are… thank you so dearly for understanding it, karen… : ) xxx
Ushna Sardar
this is truly magnificent mimi! love this! xo
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, sweet ushna… xoxo
bev langby
just stunning Mimi
mimi yoon replied
thank you dearly, bev… : )
Isa Rodriguez
I love it mimi
mimi yoon replied
thank you very much, isa… : )
MrHill
stunning piece…you are a writer too….ykag…..........
mimi yoon replied
i wish to be but am not… thank you dearly, tobey… ika, yes~ .....
Patricia Anne ...
WOW DEEP, the last part is what get me. I can relate.
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, patricia… i think we can all relate to this to some degree… xx
valzart
Aww this is beautiful sweetheART love it lol! ;} happy hippy hugglez
mimi yoon replied
why, thank you so kindly, val… hhh for you too… : )
Paul (Quixote)...
Nice work Mimi. Lovely verse.
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, paul… : )
Ushna Sardar
mimi yoon replied
thank you dear ushna…. always and always… : )
i really appreciate you…xxx
Matthew Mitchell
No Picture yet (under development)
CONGRATS ON BEING FEATURED in MIDNIGHT RAMBLERS
mimi yoon replied
let me know if you need any help, matthew…. and thank you so~ kindly…
i’m totally honored… thank you… : )
PJ Ryan
pretty and magical
mimi yoon replied
thank you pj… so much for your sweet words… : )
Delphine de Noire
Exquisite…
Mx
mimi yoon replied
hi mx… thank you very much… : )
Patricia Anne ...
mimi yoon replied
dear dear patricia… thank you for the honor… xx
hugh023
A picture may be worth a 1000 words but the pictures you paint with your words are wonderful. . .