i promise on this last day of our acquaintance

i write this last letter
dipped in the blue of indigo night

i promise to remember your whisper
when the eastern wind blows

i promise to remember your song
when the western wind blows

and i promise to think of you
when the rain comes

i promise you
on this last day of our acquaintance

  • Ingz

    Ingz

    your words are so lovely my friend xxx big hug to you xxxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    and a big hug back, lngz…. thank you so so much~ xxxxx

  • Doug Greenwald

    Doug Greenwald

    Very nice.

    They do make waterproof keyboards…

  • mimi yoon replied

    ok… i’m gonna go dry myself now… : )
    thank you doug~

  • Mark Ramstead

    Mark Ramstead

    You are a passing gift… like a beautiful sunset…

  • mimi yoon replied

    that sounds very temporary… i want to stay… : )
    thank you very much, mark…

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Wow Mimi…..this is just magic....You, my friend, are a poet even if you say you are not. You really are…. xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    hi miss poet~ thank you so much… coming from you, this means much… truly thank you, erika… xxx

  • Keiran Lusk

    Keiran Lusk

    Big sigh... Oh Mimi, this is heartachingly beautiful. I hope that all is well in your world. x

  • mimi yoon replied

    hi keiran…. hope all is well with you… haven’t seen you for awhile… all is fine in my world… thank you so much…. : ) x

  • syd baker

    syd baker

    Well now you’ve done it, I’m imagining you walking out of the shower….. but I forgive you!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you for the forgiveness, syd~ ;P
    erase that thought… please…

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    A love filled promise…..

  • mimi yoon replied

    : ) with love xxxxx

  • Tama Blough

    Tama Blough

    Beautiful, Mimi – and I am not much of a poetry person. This is simple and sweet.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, dear tama…. really appreciate you… : )

  • DanaMS

    DanaMS

    Well, I am a girl, but I’ve imagined you walking out of that shower too, lol! ;D
    Beautiful thoughts sweetie! xox

  • mimi yoon replied

    haha… funny ;P .... thanks dana…. so much…. xoxo

  • syd baker

    syd baker

    OK, .......sigh

  • mimi yoon replied

    hehe… you are a true gentleman… ;P
    x

  • Mel Brackstone

    Mel Brackstone

    Gorgeous words, mimi :)

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, mel….. : ) : )

  • KNGodin

    KNGodin

    I don’t believe syd…lol – but that really was lovely, Mimi

  • mimi yoon replied

    hehe~ i don’t either ;P…
    thank you so so much, karen… : )

  • atomikboy

    atomikboy

    It was me whispering from the shower head!!!!.....

  • mimi yoon replied

    ahhh… silly you…
    thank you for the whisper~ : )

  • mimi yoon replied

    hey you~ i deleted your second comment because it was too cute… ;P

  • Estelle O'Brien

    Estelle O'Brien

    beautiful thoughts in your head mimi xx

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you very much, estelle… hope all is well with you… xxx

  • Kym Smitt

    Kym Smitt

    It’s so sweet Mimi, haha dont catch a cold now

  • mimi yoon replied

    we are almost there… summer… : ) so i don’t think i need to worry about catching a cold…
    thank you kym~

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    i write this last letter
    dipped in the blue of indigo night

    nicely done ….like how soft spoken this is …lovely

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you cb… hope all is well with you… : )

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker

    Lovely…

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you very kindly dear leon… : )

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    Very moving…..someone was a fool….

  • mimi yoon replied

    silly…. : )

  • mimi yoon replied

    )(

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    Gorgeous, Sis. Le sigh…..xoxox

  • mimi yoon replied

    le sigh…. belated merci, soeur…. xoxoxo

  • JKKimball

    JKKimball

    soooooo beautiful!!

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you, john… very much~ : )

  • Kym Smitt

    Kym Smitt

    In the middle of winter here, shame i missed half of it on holidays to the tropics. I love my cold :)

  • mimi yoon replied

    ooo… i love cold… and surprisingly, it’s cold here in june in cali…. and i’m totally loving it… : )

  • Euan  Thorburn

    Euan Thorburn

    you have wonderful showers mimi
    xxxxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    yes, with beautiful thoughts… thank you, euan… : )

  • Farras Abdelnour

    Farras Abdelnour

    sparse, elegant, and so beautiful!

  • mimi yoon replied

    love your comments…. thank you dearly, farras… : )

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice one !!

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you g… : )

  • SHRyan

    SHRyan

    Gorgeous words Mimi,xxxSandy

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you, sandy…xxx

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    I love these type of thoughts that come out in a rush. Beautiful as always Mimi xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you beautiful… xxx

  • Boo Daily

    Boo Daily

    this is so beautiful – I love it mimi…

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, hala… very sweet of you~ : )

  • Hannah Fenton-Williams

    Hannah Fenton-...


    This was just featured in
    The beauty of poetry

  • mimi yoon replied

    hannah… thank you so much…. it’s an honor… : )

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    congrats on the feature Miss Yoon…..the person getting these promises must be very special…..

  • mimi yoon replied

    : ) thank you dear tah… : )

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Even your goodbyes are stunning.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you sweet sweet cassidy… : )

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    a beautiful last letter…xxxx

  • MarkezzAckui ...

    MarkezzAckui ...

    I’d believe you

  • mimi yoon replied

    why, thank you markezz… : )

  • Renate  Dartois

    Renate Dartois

    Wonderful writing mimi.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, renate… love your beautiful paintings… x

  • cougarfan

    cougarfan

  • mimi yoon replied

    i am truly honored, trena… thank you so kindly…. : )

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty
  • Sarafeline

    Sarafeline

    You captured my heart with such few words an amazing effect!

    Congratulations.

    Sara.x.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you sara so so so much…. means a lot… : ) x

  • Songwriter

    Songwriter

    You have a gift with words. You paint evocative word pictures. I love it. :0) Song

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so kindly, song… i appreciate your words… : )

  • skinnyman

    skinnyman

    really sweet:)

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you very much, skinnyman(:P)... : )

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