my secrets...

mimi yoon
Author: mimi yoon
Word Count: 71
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the taste of cheesecake i ate last night
how a cashmere cardigan feels on my skin
how i wear my victoria’s secret lace
tune the rain whispers to my soul
the color of my dream i woke up to this morning
the last six word entry in my journal
where i wish to be at six pm
what i wish for at this moment
and
where i keep my secrets…

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    I love how you can pack so much into a little poem, Sis. Like an exhalation of sensuality. xoxox

  • mimi yoon replied

    why thank you dear sister… i wouldn’t call it a poem… just a bunch of thoughts i walked out of my shower with… and oops~ forgot a line about victoria’s secret… : ) hope your weekend was a beautiful one… sending you hugs… xoxoxo

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    oooh Mimi…this is so secretly and delicously mysterious. And it’s funny that you point out that today is June 1. I was thinking the exact same thing today, and I was so glad that June’s finally here. Beautiful poetry as always Mimi, xx

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, erika…. love your comment… and yes~ it is june already…. there must be something special about june…?? thank you again~ : ) xxx

  • Scott d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    great words ,

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so kindly, scott… : ) : )

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    YKAG…I wrote a line today about a girl that liked cashmere too….wierd…...

  • mimi yoon replied

    :P weird… and i.k.a…. :P
    yay for cashmere and yay for her (your girl who wears cashmere)...
    thank you tobey… : )

  • Denis Molodkin

    Denis Molodkin

    Awesome Mimi

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, denis… : )

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    Weird..not wierd, there is a difference :)

  • mimi yoon replied

    i knew what you meant… : )

  • Patricia Anne McCarty

    Patricia Anne ...

    nice image writing. :)

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, patricia… you’re so nice~ : ) x

  • Chet King

    Chet King

    my secrets wipe away the SoCal “June Gloom”.

  • mimi yoon replied

    sunny hot stuff… i guess~ : )

  • Jordan Busson

    Jordan Busson

    June is in the air, the taste of summer and inspiration. You said that this is not a poem, just a bunch of words strung together. But, it is poetry. Unintentional, perhaps, but beautiful nonetheless. The way this flows when I speak your inspired words aloud, is so soft and delicately sensual. This is art in black and white and june.

  • mimi yoon replied

    happy june, elucidate… : )
    thank you so much for your beautiful words… : )

  • Alvaro Sánchez

    Alvaro Sánchez

    i love cheesecake…;)

  • mimi yoon replied

    me too… what flavor?
    hi alvaro~ : )

  • Leon Walker

    Leon Walker

    Very nice Mimi!!! Your magnificent writing may be another…

  • mimi yoon replied

    but it’s no secret… haha just kidding…
    thank you so so kindly, leon… : )

  • Michele Randell

    Michele Randell

    mmmmm cheesecake and cashmere…...what more could a girl ask for :)
    Beautiful writing Mimi…....

  • mimi yoon replied

    yes… and victoria’s secret lingerie… : )
    thank you michelle… very much~

  • Symmetry45

    Symmetry45

    I’m sorry, I still can’t move past the Victoria’s Secret! lol

    Amazing ain’t got about a damn thing on you Miss Beautiful Mimi Yoon!!!

    Hope God is treating you well my dear. Miss you…..

  • mimi yoon replied

    hi steve… : )
    thank you so much… blushing… : )
    hope all is well with you and miss your written work… : )

  • Ghelly

    Ghelly


    You have being Featured in the...
    First Things Group

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you thank you thank you, ghelly…. it’s my honor….. : )

  • billyboy

    billyboy

    I so love the way you tell us the secrets you keep where you keep your secrets…
    OK, so you’re not telling us everything are you…
    But the cheescake thing? I SO get that!!
    xo

  • mimi yoon replied

    sinfully delicious, yeah?.... only at times… most of the time… : )
    thank you so much, billy…. xo

  • Lisa Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    :))))) you are love….

  • mimi yoon replied

    and you are… xxxxxxx

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    Hugs back to you, Sis :). And see what i mean? You have a poet’s soul – you have it coming out of your ears even when you don’t intend to…xoxoxo

  • mimi yoon replied

    it’s all rain’s fault… and cheescake’s… : )
    thank you dear sister… xoxoxo

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB

    you’re both a talented artist AND writer, wonderful words. :-)

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, jennifer…. next to you, i’m just a wannabe…. : )

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Love the way you never tell it all angel….beautiful!! hehehe!! xxxxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    that’s how you keep secrets, dearest beautiful lady… : )
    thank you so so so~ much…. xxxxx

  • Julian Escardo

    Julian Escardo

    I love this just because….............June!! -

  • mimi yoon replied

    yes, just because…. thank you dear friend… and happy june~ : )

  • DanaMS

    DanaMS

    (did you add the lace thingy or my work monitor has lingerie filter? ;)
    Beautifully written sweetheart!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you dear dana… you and your monitor’s ok… i did add the lace… : ) xx

  • johnny hancen

    johnny hancen

    it’s refreshing to read something that makes me open my mind to another world.none of it can i relate to but it’s intriguing to look in the window.thank you.

  • mimi yoon replied

    ooo… so love your comment… thank you so so much for these ridiculously awesome words, johnny…

  • Patricia Anne McCarty

    Patricia Anne ...

    xoxo

  • mimi yoon replied

    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo : )

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice read….. June, winter, cold and rain for the past three days….

  • mimi yoon replied

    i wish for cold… i wish for winter… i wish mostly for rain…. lucky you and thank you~ : )

  • Songwriter

    Songwriter

    Your writing is so delicate and sensual it must be approached with great care and enjoyed as it sifts gently into your mind. You have a great craft. Thank you for your gift shared. :0) Song

  • mimi yoon replied

    and your compliment is so heartfelt and appreciated… thank you so kindly, song… love love love your comment…. : )

  • nancy salamouny

    nancy salamouny

    thanks for sharing…your secrets are little peaks into your soul

  • mimi yoon replied

    what a sweet thing to say…. thank you so much, nancy… your art is beautiful… : )

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    You just get me hungry for more….your writing is gorgeous XX

  • linaji

    linaji

  • rubyjo

    rubyjo

    oh, I love this.
    makes me want to know where you want to be at 6pm

  • silverstrummer - David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    There is a beautiful softness in your poetry Mimi and congratulations on your features too such an accolade for such a wonderful artist as yourself and the work you do! – David

  • DarKarsean

    DarKarsean

    wonderful – i love this

  • XavierMordant

    XavierMordant

    The breath of a friend in your ear-

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    love it…in the silence…how it says everything, yet nothing at all. This is an enigma. xxx

  • Rob Toombs

    Rob Toombs

    Beautiful Mimi as always..

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

  • Jen Cannella

    Jen Cannella

    I love this!

  • Geoff Coleman - Landscapes

    Geoff Coleman...

    Ah the place of secrets in a soul of such sensibility must be a sublime place indeed. Such beautiful simplicity my friend.

  • Trijpmaker

    Trijpmaker

    Lovely..
    but do a spell check..
    there are grammar errors

  • mimi yoon replied

    thanks~

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