will you trust me?

mimi yoon
Author: mimi yoon
Word Count: 153
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close the curtains
and send the stars home

put on the song
for i’m in the mood

do you trust me?

undress my fears
but be gentle
for i’m shy

take my hand
and the brush too
and dip it in your soul
and dab on your desire

i’ll lead you
through every stoke
and every line

do trust me…

paint my hair
with your secrets
darkest and sinful

color my eyes
in amber and honey
until you drown
and find me there
waiting

paint my lips
with your passion
crimson and scarlet
the color of your soul

dab on my skin
with your lust
caramel and porcelain
sinful and sweet

and drape me in blush
for i’m coy
and vulnerable

do you trust me now?

raise me
to meet you in your heaven
for we’ve just begun

  • Tama Blough

    Tama Blough

    Yummy one…

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you, tama… glad you enjoyed it… hope you liked the song too… : )

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Wow Mimi!! This is delicate and magical! Lovely thoughts and words! You sure have great inspiration to come up with something like this. I love it!

  • mimi yoon replied

    hi erica… sounds crazy but i get inspired by the sound of running water… shower…. thank you so much for your beautiful words… happy weekend~ : )

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    A beautiful, delightful read.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, rhena… : )

  • Farras Abdelnour

    Farras Abdelnour

    wow!! so beautiful, mimi. as erika said, magical, and touching

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, farras… so sweet of you… hope you have a wonderful weekend… : )

  • Jordan Busson

    Jordan Busson

    Your writing is as amazing as ever, Mimi. This is incredible.

  • mimi yoon replied

    you are so so sweet, e~ thank you very much… i truly appreciate you… : )

  • atomikboy

    atomikboy

    I’m from hell…..sorry!!!

  • mimi yoon replied

    ha ha . . . he he . . .
    a burnt devilicious bbq pig comes to my mind… ;P sorry~

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    Whew…gorgeous & sensual. The Artists’ eroticism.

  • mimi yoon replied

    exactly, selkie… i was thinking of body painting… it could get pretty erotic (at least in one’s imagination)... thank you so much, selkie… : )

  • jacqleen

    jacqleen

    soooooooooooo erotic and sensual…...just LOVE it!!! You are One Sexy and Sweet Girl !!! xx

  • mimi yoon replied

    miss sexy herself, jacqleen…. thank you so much, sweetie… : )
    xxx

  • bev langby

    bev langby

    yes yes i trust you lol this is wonderful Mimi

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you thank you bev… for your sweet words and for trusting me… ;D xx

  • Gunter Wenzel

    Gunter Wenzel

    mimi mimi mimi so lovely!

  • mimi yoon replied

    gunter gunter gunter thank you… : )

  • Impassioned

    Impassioned

    So very nice…

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, mark… : )

  • Tama Blough

    Tama Blough

    I had been so lost in the poem I forgot to listen to the song! Good one!

  • mimi yoon replied

    i’m glad, tama~ : )

  • hugh023

    hugh023

    As always, you paint such wonderful pictures with your words.

    BTW couldn’t listen to the song as I get a message that ‘This video is not available in your country.’ Makes me wonder what it was and why they don’t want people in Thailand to see it. . . Curious. . .

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you very kindly, hugh… : )
    the song is heaven sent by esthero….

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    oh mimi, this is very alluring and romantic, and full of sensuality… you write like you paint, with perfection

    we must be on the same universal plane today… as i wrote something very similar in topic… i was thinking to upload it tomorrow.

  • mimi yoon replied

    can’t wait to read your writing, pj… : )
    and thank you so much, girl~ my writing skill does not come anywhere near yours… : )

  • greeneyedlady

    greeneyedlady

    lovely imagery mimi….

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you very much, green eyed lady~ : )

  • Lisa Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Yes xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    yay~ : )
    xxx

  • Geoff Coleman - Landscapes

    Geoff Coleman...

    Ahh such exquisitely articulated vulnerability – a canvas of gentleness Mimi painted with words.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you mr. seal… : )
    i appreciate you so much, geoff… :D :D :D

  • Doug Greenwald

    Doug Greenwald

    If only… This is exactly what I have been missing and why I’ve initiated the current set of changes in my life.

    And I always get lost in your eyes.

  • mimi yoon replied

    very kind of you, doug… thank you so much… : )

  • msdebbie

    msdebbie

    Dear Mimi – wish I could get beautiful words like this from a shower! Makes me wonder: steaming hot, right? Not tepid or lukewarm at all? (And I love when the ending is a beginning – poetic!!!)

  • mimi yoon replied

    hello ms. debbie~ definitely steaming… i never take shower with tepid or lukewarm water… thank you so much for your sweet words… :P

  • Cathi Norman

    Cathi Norman

    Wow – this is so beautiful!

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you dearly, cathi… : )

  • Denis Dalby

    Denis Dalby

    Wonderful Mimi! I’m breathless….....

  • mimi yoon replied

    ; )
    thank you so so so~ much, denis… : )
    love your new avatar…

  • CateTownsend

    CateTownsend

    Amazing

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you cate~ happy weekend… : )

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Mimi, everything you write, everything you paint touches my heart. From the shortest lines that compliment your art, to the colors you use in your art and your words…you are all an artist/author should be. (I find showers inspirational)

  • mimi yoon replied

    hi beautiful cassidy~ your kind words always move my heart… you have no idea how much i thank you… (showers are inspirational… and i am so happy to know you feel that way too)
    have a very happy weekend, cassidy… :D

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Oh Mimi…...this is unbelievably beautiful lotus blossom. xxxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    you are the beautiful one with the most beautiful words… thank you so so dearly and have a wonderful weekend…. xxx

  • bill bell

    bill bell

    Beautiful

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so very much, bill bell… : )

  • Michael Scholl

    Michael Scholl

    So beautiful, mimi

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, mike… : )

  • ambient-1

    ambient-1

    Mimi your sensuality is delicious, gorgeous, tantalizing and wonderful and your gift to express your whole being in words and art – not the least of which is a gorgeous woman… is sublime! XXX

  • mimi yoon replied

    i’ll feed on your kind words… i am utterly flattered by your words… thank you so so dearly, robert… xxx

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    I listened to the song and read your words and I found it an eclectic experience….the mood was utterly fantastic….I think your amazing. XX

  • mimi yoon replied

    dear arcadia…. i come read all of your beautiful writings… and get somewhat intimidated to leave comments… afraid that they may not be intelligent or good enough… you are amazing and these kind words coming from you mean so dearly to me… thank you so much, arcadia… xxx

  • OneMultipleCode

    OneMultipleCode

    delicious

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, one multiple code… :D

  • hugh023

    hugh023

    Just wanted to thank you for letting me know the name of the music you referred to. I managed to find a copy to listen to. I think I’ll have to listen to it again. . .

  • sterenborg

    sterenborg

    another great piece

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much for your kind words and support, marja… i think you’re great… x

  • Emmahleee

    Emmahleee

    So magical..

  • mimi yoon replied

    so sweet of you, emma… thank you very much… : )

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    sublime. You create magic with a pen and a brush xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    it is the sweetest when someone who truly creates magic compliments me that i do too… i adore and cherish your words, cat… xxx

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    Delicious…
    You’re right, Mimi – powerful writing IS sexy…you’ve just proven it :)
    xoxo

  • mimi yoon replied

    YES, dear sister… thank you so so much… hope you’re having a great friday afternoon… can’t believe the weekend’s here already… xoxo

  • Lidia

    Lidia

    really cool well done

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, lidia… : )

  • sendhu

    sendhu

    Excellent and inspiring poem. Every line paints the beauty of love, worship of body.
    Nothing can paint as water. Cleansing your makeover, bringing back the shining dark in hair, Flaming lips, Gift wrapping the nudity in polythene … nothing can paint as water. This poem has brought in the real beauty – the beauty of soul. Excellent Mimi.

  • mimi yoon replied

    your words are utterly amazing… wow, sendhu~ you are the true poet…
    thank you so so much and have a great weekend… : )

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    Close the curtains and send the stars home…. This is a beautiful line, from a beautiful poem. Well done.

  • DaRkSiLeNcE

    DaRkSiLeNcE

    not only are you painting amazing pictures that are visible, but also ones that we can feel through words & the translation of those into our imagination… i really have to colour your beautiful poems with a vibrant emerald green for fresh & then image a field of white flowers for the purity of these words… yes, I’d trust you, cos these words can only come from the heart ;)

  • Larasolnishko

    Larasolnishko

    wonderful piece of delicate soul

  • Leon Walker

    Leon Walker

    This is a fabulous piece of writing Mimi!!! Just wonderful…

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