and she longs for that one lost summer...
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withered daisy
tinged white
parched and transparent lies
song she remembers no longer
returns to her dreams
as a sin
her heart hears no tune
it holds no shape she’s once carved
only a secret or two
her eyes remember a journey
back 200 years past
and the skin that kept her warm
she wears winter in her heart
autumn in her eyes
spring in her hair
and she longs for that one lost summer…
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Mark Ramstead
We all do Mimi…
mimi yoon replied
yes, i suppose so… thank you mark… : )
Ingz
so beautifully written dear Mimi xxx big hug and hope you are well and happy my friend xxxx
mimi yoon replied
i am very happy, well, and busy with a new business venture… hope you’re well and happy too, lngz…. thank you so very much, dear friend…. : ) xxxxx
arsalanzeimaran
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mimi yoon replied
ummm…. thanx? : )
Symmetry45
Lived or forgone, all is indeed and unfortunately lost to yesterday if for whatever the heart relinquishes so too still yearns for—yet what can be lost by things experienced or ne’er begot that the heart cannot procure of its own device, henceforth conceived of for that which it had so yearned…
mimi yoon replied
she’s happy today and the memories of rainbow and storm still dance but become fainter and fainter… and her heart yearns no more… :P… thank you for beautifully poetic words, steve… p.s. one sunday, she confessed to her priest her sins… :P
jim marshal
she wears winter in her heart
autumn in her eyes
spring in her hair
and she longs for that one lost summer…
beautiful,darling. x
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, jim… xx
bev langby
Oh delightful Mimi…......
mimi yoon replied
thank you bev…. :D :D :D
Pip Gerard
don’t we all long for lost summer! :D
this is just beautiful Mimi.
Pip Gerard
oops… meant to say.
Don’t we all long for that one lost summer!
mimi yoon replied
yes… how did we all end up with one lost summer? hehe
thank you so much, pip… : )
Denis Dalby
I agree with Jim.. those last four lines are beautifully written.
mimi yoon replied
thank you thank you thank you thank you so much, denis… :D
happy weekend~
MyheART
very beautiful and touching:)
mimi yoon replied
you are so sweet, robin… i thank you very much… :D :D :D
hope you have a wonderful weekend…
ShadowDancer
mimi, so melancholy and full of broken dreams and faded memories of what was…
mimi yoon replied
thank you beautiful… just a few minutes ago, i was over at your portfolio looking at your short hair pic again and was asking myself should i or should i not (hair cut)... :D should i or should i not?????
thanks pj… have a bubbly weekend~
sterenborg
beautiful
Cassey
Once again beautiful imagery and heart. I love your writing.
Selkie
“winter in her heart
autumn in her eyes
spring in her hair…
Sigh…so perfect. Such a talent for imagery you have, Mimi.
I love it.
xoxo
sendhu
Very good capture of emotions.
“her heart hears no tune”... Pity girl. so pathetic.
I feel for her lost summer.
JellybeaN2
ur work is beautiful