a beautiful story
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some stories are better left untold…
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because i have a story
a beautiful one
but i can’t share it with you

it wishes to escape my fingers
as i sit here and tap away
i, a, and m
and s and a and d
and my tears pool on
y and o
and u

i know you’d tear too
and would make puddles
on r and a
and on i and n
if you heard the story

it’s about the ocean and pacific
and a chinatree
and the map an angel drew for me
it’s about an abyss and indigo
and the dreams and coming home
it’s about the scent in my drawer
and love and prussian longing
it’s about a one way road
and the drive against the wind
and a chicken pot pie
and cranberry juice
it’s about a rickety house
and the morning coffee
and one summer that came and left
a little too soon
may be when i’m wrinkled and grey
long after i put away my trophies
i will tell it to a child with big bright eyes
when i’m wrinkled and grey
i will tell the story
about the rain and its song
and how it came
and how it still comes
and how it will always come
and how i will always dance in the rain
with the rain…

i am sad today
because i have a story
a beautiful one
but i just can’t share it with you
Lisa Jewell
I have one too XX
You shall never cease to amaze me….
You stand out My Darling…
This is another brilliant piece. awwwww I am in awe.
XXXX
mimi yoon replied
yes, but some are best left untold…
your beautiful words always encourage me to write more
when i’m not even a writer…. i thank you so so dearly… and now it’s time for me to go work on my painting…. :D :D :D
hope you’re dreaming happy dreams and wake up to a bright weekend…
xxxxx
Jordan Busson
This is beautiful, Mimi. Bitter-sweet, poignant, emotive and beautifully written. Your use of illustrations has further aided your words in putting across their message.
mimi yoon replied
you’re very kind elucidate… and your words mean so much to me… thank you so so much…. :D
silverstrummer...
Oh mimi you have written this so beautifully but with sadness I see the rain causes you pain. You are such a beautiful person and you shouldn’t be sad bless. – David :>((
mimi yoon replied
hi david… rain doesn’t cause me pain or sadness…. rain inspires me and makes me happy and creative… thank you so dearly for the kind words, david… : )
Adrena87
This is absolutely amazing… Wow…. triple bravo… One of my all time favorite poems EVER!
mimi yoon replied
wow, adrena~ that means so much…. thank you so much !!!!! :D :D :D
DanaMS
Share it with the wind..
write it on the paper
and make that high spped airplane
then climb the tree
that hangs over the river
and let it fly free
angels in heaven will read it
and maybe one day it will come to me?
Beautifully written Mimi dear :)
mimi yoon replied
that is beautiful dana….
thank you so much for leaving me such moving words…
really beautiful…. : )
atomikboy
“Rainy day, dream away…ain’t no use in crying…just let it groove it’s own way”.....Jimi Hendrix
mimi yoon replied
beautiful… thank you atomikboy~ : )
Wayne Pearson
Don’t be sad Mimi, life is to short, kick the ‘sad’ thought in the butt and send it on it’s way.
mimi yoon replied
i’ve done that long long time ago… thank you so dearly, wayne… : )
richardseah
How beautifully you have transformed your sadness and created a highly imaginative piece of writing / art. Have a good, happy weekend ahead :-)
mimi yoon replied
belated thank you richardseah… i really appreciate your kind words… : )
Paul (Quixote)...
Excellent story. Your writing is as excellent as your images.
mimi yoon replied
belated thank you, paul… thank you so so much for your sweet words… : )
Tracey Mac
How poignant are you words…......this is divine…......
mimi yoon replied
i might’ve said this before, tracey… divine describes you… : )
thank you so dearly… xxx
rubyjo
what can I say that i haven’t said before, beautiful.
mimi yoon replied
ahh~ love your new glow stick figure avatar, rubyjo… : )
belated thank you… ; )
PJ Ryan
you never cease to amaze me .. your beautiful words, creative brush … lovely !
mimi yoon replied
thank you so dearly for your kind words, pj… thank you~ : )
Michael Scholl
Very beautiful, mimi. Very beautiful!
mimi yoon replied
thank you mike… thank you… : )
Cassey
Absolutely beautiful story. So creative you are.
mimi yoon replied
thank you so so much, sweet cassidy… i appreciate you… : )
bev langby
oh what u have shared is enough and sad is a reminder of how good happiness feels and soon u will be happy again …........so savour the sad and rejoyce in the happy….....and thanks for sharing , no one else could say it better ….........
mimi yoon replied
so beautifully and perfectly said bev… thank you so much… i really appreciate these wise words… xx
Farras Abdelnour
beautiful, gentle, and playful.
mimi yoon replied
belated thank you farras… : )
Novice
you are very talented….you do things outside the box….well done you
mimi yoon replied
i think i do things outside the box, because i live inside a box… thank you so kindly, novice… : )
Karen Cougan
oh touched my heart, well done
xkc
mimi yoon replied
thank you so so much, karen… xx
DaRkSiLeNcE
Totally amazing mimi!! & beautiful writing yet again, true art!! & the little extras with the writing are just capturing!! I’d love to be the first to buy your book of all these writings ;)
mimi yoon replied
do you know any publisher, d? thank you so much~ you know your compliments mean so much to me… : )
Geoff Coleman...
And I was feeling so happy until I read this piercing gentle sadness – and THAT’S how good a writer-artist you are! So very moving and beautiful and full of memories that I couldn’t have but felt I shared. And this drawing poetry of yours Mimi – a whole new genre and each outing more and more masterful. You are a visionary stamping puddles with your gumboots.
mimi yoon replied
you always know just perfect words to say to make me feel that i’ve done it right… you know you are the seal of approval, right? i wish you knew how much i appreciate you… just gracing my pages would be good enough but you always leave me the seal… on a melted wax and all… and it feels golden… : ) thank you very kindly geoff….
Leese
could your creativity get any greater?! lovely piece..
mimi yoon replied
what a sweet compliment… thank you so much, leese… : )
Ingz
can words be more beautiful? so moving….I love this and everything you do my friend xxxx
mimi yoon replied
you are one of the sweetest, lngz…. thank you so much and always… xxxxxxxxxx
Cathi Norman
Brilliant!!
mimi yoon replied
thank you very much, cathi… : )
Erika .
Mimi, this is mind-blowing! I really love this. You paint such a beautiful picture in words. So full of emotion. I love it.
mimi yoon replied
this is such a humbling experience receiving such wonderful compliments from amazing writers including you, erika…. thank you so so much…. happy happy weekend !!!!! :D :D :D
Astoreth
‘i am sad today
because i have a story
a beautiful one
but i just can’t share it with you’ xxxx
mimi yoon replied
beautiful jane…. hope you’re not saying you’re sad… wish you beautiful thoughts and much happiness… thank you so dearly…xxxxx
Cwithe .
mi~^ _. ^ dear..this is a pleasant one :)
what is a prussian longing btw. ?
mimi yoon replied
hi c ~ ^ _.
thank you…. ^ _.
prussian is deep blue… painfully deep passionate longing ? ^ _.^
thank you thank you thank you…
roybarry
I have shivers now, from reading magic trapped in ink.
mimi yoon replied
wow roy~ thank you so much for such lovely compliment… : )
Clare Colins
What a brilliantly well constructed , well thought out, precious poem. Beautiful :)
mimi yoon replied
thank you so so so much, clare… : )
Elizabeth Bravo
What a wonderful way you have of sharing. This is beautiful. Thanks for letting us in and around the thought of it.
mimi yoon replied
it’s my pleasure, elizabeth… thank you very much for the compliment… : )
Sorina Williams
wonderful writing as always! :)
mimi yoon replied
thank you so dearly, sorina… : )
hugh023
Makes me wish there was something I could do to lessen that sadness.
To understand ‘joy’ we must experience the opposite
For even sadness has its place and its lessons.
May you learn those lessons well
So that when joy returns, as you know it must
Your heart will soar
And joy will be the flavour of your tears. . .
mimi yoon replied
you are unbelievably kind, hugh… i appreciate you sincerely… i am very moved by your words… : )
ArcadiaTempest
I too have this moment in my life…......thank you for sharing this….....it opens me to feeling less alone and that brings a lightness to how I feel….......Your verse here has been a gift to me…thank you XXXXXX
mimi yoon replied
that means so much to me, arcadia…. i feel this writing has served its purpose… thank you so dearly for your beautiful words… xxxxx
Amber Elizabet...
This is so wonderful

mimi yoon replied
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this is one of the greatest honor, amber…
thank you so kindly…
:D
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Denis Dalby
Your originality never ceases to amaze me Mimi. So charming!
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, denis… :P
Christopher E...
this is great, love your creativity on this with the keyboard keys, and on rainy days, they are beautiful because after the rain, all smells clean, and the air is clear, also a good chance to get some fog..hehe
excellent writing
mimi yoon replied
you are making me miss the rain and fog terribly… and yes, with fog, we can capture some beautiful foggy moments… : )
rain and fog… rain and fog… rain and fog… we had 100F weather today in california…. rain and fog… rain and fog… fain and rog… oops~ ;P
thank you very much, christopher… : )
cathrinedp
I so love your words. And the way your heart shines through. This touched me Mimi xxx
mimi yoon replied
awww… and i so so love your words, cat… and the way your heart and soul shines through… and the way you never cease to touch me… thank you, beautiful cat… xxxxx
Outdoors2
You may be sad today
but… eternally happy
for this beautiful story
is yours to cherish …;-))
xo
mimi yoon replied
thank you, roy… always so sweet… and i am not sad today or yesterday or tomorrow… xo~
mzdreamy
This is my first time on red bubble and your work really, really stands out!
How can one person be so talented? =]
mimi yoon replied
wow~ that’s a very generous compliment, mzdreamy…. thank you so kindly… : )
lazydaze
Nice writting Mimi !! :))
mimi yoon replied
thank you very much, ld… : )
journey360
i like what you wrote
mimi yoon replied
thank you very much, journey 360… : )
Jane Keats
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JonoCarrick
so originally emotional, spellbinding and utterly gorgeous. We all have those stories where the pain is still fresh in our hearts. and it hurts to share it.
mimi yoon replied
your words are always so beautiful and deeply heartfelt… you have no idea how much i appreciate your compliments… thank you always, jono… : )
Margaret Harris
So sweet ! ...very talented xx
mimi yoon replied
thank you very kindly, margaret… xxx
joshuapie
Absolutely gorgeous mimi just like you…
and here is a big warm hug to cheer you up (HUG)
peace and love josh
mimi yoon replied
you’re such a sweetheart… thank you so so much~ : ) x
Ushna Sardar
mimi yoon replied
thank you so so much, ushna….
i am so so honored….
xx
Emmahleee
You are so creative.
I love your work, I wish I could be like you.
My poems are good, but your work is amazing..
mimi yoon replied
oh my gosh emmahlee… i just went and read your last piece… you are amazingly talented… and so~ young… i admire your talent… and thank you so much… : )
Emmahleee
Your very welcome Mimi.
Your style of writing is incredibly unique, powerful and eyecatching.
I love it.
And thankyou for the compliment I sincerly appriciate it with all my heart
Geoff Coleman...
Ahh you sweet thang – it’s a pure pleasure to look at and read your soul’s poetry MImi – you need no seal of approval from me or anyone else – you are a truly inspired artist and you bring some moments grace into the world of anyone who looks at your art.
armadillozenith
O wonderful Mimi Yoon !
neat fusion of message and medium in the keyboard-letters shown there.
(how do you do those images amid text I wonder)
love to you
jim marshal
it’s about the ocean and pacific
and a chinatree
and the map an angel drew for me
This is the best thing I’ve read on here today. I loved your colour, warmth and melody. Special.
AmeliaWhispers
Amazing
hsien-ku
the most beautiful stories are secret and sad. preferably spoken only with glances and gestures, or found years later on faded letters. your writing is lovely.
Trenchtownrock
This is a beautiful story the way you wrote it and infusing the art …nice work.
happyfeet5
Congratulaions on your features. Now this is sad itself. And you have to tell another story. But if you keep it to yourself, then it will maybe make you even sader. Iris