you sing in autumn voice eternally...

you sang about a boy
simple and ordinary
but had a dream to conquer the moon
all in your autumn voice
the audience melted
with every verse
and every note

you sang about a star
in the starry winter sky
where it did not belong
and how you wished to be the moon
to be by its side
so it would belong
the audience dreamed
about the moon
and wished to be that star

you sang about a girl
you once shared her breath
and how she left
to find her spring
and left you
with winter and blizzard
the audience ached
and wished to kiss your heart

the audience did not realize
it is my heart you sang to melt
it’s by my side you wished to belong
it is my heart you wished would turn around

only you know
only the moon and the star know
and only i know

you sing in autumn voice eternally…

  • Patricia Anne McCarty

    Patricia Anne ...

    wonderful words.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so very much, patricia… i’m happy you think so… :D

  • jacqleen

    jacqleen

    WOW…..............what a TOUCHING little story….........and knowing all this, did your heart ever turned around???

    mimi…..........you just blow me away with your tenderness, and sensitivity in all your work….this was just BRILLIANT!!! LV it so much!!!!

  • mimi yoon replied

    hi beautiful jacqleen… kinda cold and gloomy today, huh? just the way i love~ ;P

    thank you so much for your beautiful words… always…. a little story i just made up in the shower… ;P my heart is always facing one direction no matter how crazy lost i am… hope you’re having a sweet little weekend, beautiful… xx

  • Alixzandra

    Alixzandra

    Beautiful

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so so much, alixzandra…. :D

  • Vasile Stan

    Vasile Stan

    mimi, watch out my friend… your heart is full of music and your soul’s dancing on the music of your heart… watch out, before you know it, you could find yourself in Love on Higher Plains… and there’s no cure There. You’ll cross the point of no return and step into the Plain of Eternal Youth, the realm of the Spirit.
    Be forewarned my friend! Your poem is intoxicatingly beautiful..

  • mimi yoon replied

    yes, friend… why not? the plain of eternal youth, the realm of the spirit, i’ll cross into it without any regrets while dancing to my music… thank you so very much for your poetic compliment, vasile…. :D

  • GreenWitch

    GreenWitch

    Quite sad but beautiful writing :) xox

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much, sweet reena… : ) xoxo

  • ambient-1

    ambient-1

    Beautiful songs nonetheless. Autumn’s eternal voice is always carried on the wind. Thank you for capturing them and interpreting them for us! Lovely soul-you.

  • mimi yoon replied

    autumn wind always brings that one song and make us pause and drift with forgotten dreams… thank you so so much, robert… for your beautiful words… : )

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    beautiful poetry
    it sings !

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so very much, shoaib… : )

  • Narcissus17

    Narcissus17

    why do i feel that this would so suit a tragic opera?

  • mimi yoon replied

    i think i could see that too… because he sings only about autumn and winter… spring, he only dreams about… tragic, indeed… thank you so very much, narcissus… :D

  • DanaMS

    DanaMS

    Oh Mimi… such a beautiful poem..
    only difference is that this is me singing with that autumn voice.. I want to be a star and a moon and a sun for that ONE…

  • mimi yoon replied

    dana, thank you so much for your sweet sweet words…
    i hope you be the star and the moon and the sun too…
    i hope you be all you dream of being… and hope you try singing in spring voice and see how beautiful that sounds…
    thank you again, dana~ :D

  • Mark Peterson

    Mark Peterson

    So beautiful…

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so dearly, mark… i am so happy you thought that… :D :D :D

  • EnlightenedOne

    EnlightenedOne

    Whoever resides in your heart Mimi is truly a blessed man. You are one hell of an amazing lady.

  • mimi yoon replied

    and you are a beautiful and sweet soul… thank you so much, steve… :D :D :D

  • Outdoors2

    Outdoors2

    Savor, the apples
    and cinnamon on breath
    The burnt umber and crimson
    as leaves twirl to their depth

    Inhale, all the hemlocks
    the spruce and the fir
    as they hold on reticently
    till crisp nights with out stir

    With hunters moon on the wane
    as celebrity stars come about
    winking diamonds on indigo
    this autumn night has no doubt

    So as we wish on our choice
    and dream in the skies
    dress warm as a bear
    and remember ….

    keep the paper cranes from the fires….;-P

    xo…;-)



  • mimi yoon replied

    belated xoxoxo… :D

  • mimi yoon replied

    you write so beautifully, roy~

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Beautiful!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxox

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you, sally… xoxo

  • TheArtistMario

    TheArtistMario

    Beautiful… this reminds me of something I would have heard my mother singing softly as a child… my mind translating it to English… very, very touching Mimi

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thanks to mr. passionate mario… ;P
    very very sweet of you… : )

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    And it is Autumn here again… hear my voice…

    Nice, sweet, piece Mimi !!

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you gregory… : )

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    pure magic. You write so from the heart…the words are music that took me on a sublime journey. xxx

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you, cat…. haven’t seen you for awhile… miss you and hope all is ok~ xxxxx

  • drewjthomas

    drewjthomas

    followed the lilt to the end
    and could not stop my ending
    with “autumn’s voice-eternal”
    ---than---—-
    “autumn voice eternally…”

    —-drewjthomas

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you very much for reading and for your comment, drewjthomas… : )

  • MoonSpiral

    MoonSpiral

    VERY BEAUTIFUL Mimi!!!! Congrats on your feature!!!!!

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you thank you thank you, tammy… :D :D :D

  • Jeff Clark

    Jeff Clark

    One of these days I’ll stop being awed by your talent and just accept it. Beautiful words like yours melt into the soul, changing it forever. I don’t know if I’m a bigger fan of your writing or images but luckily I don’t have to choose. : )

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you, jeff, for your endless support… i truly sincerely appreciate every word from you…. thank you…. : )

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German

    another beautiful artistic poem mimi…...thanks for sharing with us!

  • mimi yoon replied

    dear suzanne…. i am so so honored…. thank you very much, and you are putting all kinds of thoughts in my head now~ ;P

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    beautiful words that sing from your soul…...from the talented mimi yoon….wonderful
    congrates on the feature

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so much cb… all these features, now i really wish i was a writer… :D

  • Anne  McGinn

    Anne McGinn

    This is beautiful Mimi. I loved how I felt when I read it.

  • mimi yoon replied

    thank you so so dearly anne… : )

  • Geoff  Coleman - Landscapes

    Geoff Coleman...

    Profound and eloquent and moving. Made me shiver with its beauty Mimi – you trek emotional lands of rare beauty and sensitivity, and bring back songs to sing in our hearts.

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated thank you, geoff for your huge compliment…. i thoroughly enjoy your praise…. i savor it and cherish it…. ;D

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    lol
    ur so talented
    and wield a beautiful soul…smilez

  • mimi yoon replied

    belated : )

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