she saw the end of the sky trapped within cement walls...
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the wind no longer carried the familiar scent
she smelled old concrete and mildew
no seagulls flew
instead the broken fragments of frozen waves
that tasted like plastic
she saw the end of the sky
trapped within the cement walls
grey and cold
she still stood on the ledge
in the wind
she knew she was there to catch silent whispers
but she could not remember who’s…
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architectural sculpture
graduate portfolio review 2oo9
@ southern california institute of architecture
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Mel Brackstone
This is so interesting, Mimi. Colours and textures as well as the overlays make for an intriguing image.
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much mel…. had a few of my students ditch their afternoon classes on friday and went on a field trip to an architecture school famous for their innovative work… the school building is an old long(very very long) high ceilinged warehouse located right in the middle of downtown, los angeles… some of the biggest and the most famous architecture firms were there reviewing students’ work… it was an awesome and inspiring experience for my students…
this image is a student’s work that was displayed and i caught the top portion and the building’s ceiling….
thank you so much again, mel… : )
Outdoors2
That tiny piece of sky keeps breathing in hope…
The drawers sit empty
but for rodents musk
within their walls
long gone the trust
still, echo’s knock
without a sound
waiting to hear
old memories found
haha
mimi yoon replied
only rodents i found within the walls (outside) of my house are the ones that drowned in the swimming pool… haha… and they are not pretty….
thanks roy~
Glen Allen
It makes an interesting and wonderful abstract.
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, glen… i thought so too… it’s an abstract seascape… : )
Farras Abdelnour
this is a beautiful poem, the mood in it is beautifully described. the photo is interesting. can’t help but think of math, with the photo’s lines and shapes.
mimi yoon replied
i’m sure there are much math and physics applied in the sculpture and in the architecture of the building itself… the numbers and the lines of the texture i’ve used is an old piece of paper that has electrical wiring information recorded… found it in an electrical box at my art school…. thank you so much, farras, for your coomment… : )
Wayne Pearson
Mimi, there is so much in this image, I love the colours and different textures, an instant eyecatcher. And then there are your beautiful words !!
mimi yoon replied
thank you for kind compliments, wayne… very much… : )
Michael Scholl
Love your words…sad and uncertain. Way to leave us hanging.
mimi yoon replied
haha… hang on, mike~ ;P
thanks!!!
Ehivar Flores ...
Mimi, this is dramatic and intelligent, structural and organic, good artistic work,
it is as if you made philosophy of the cotidianidad in many of your works,I learn much of your art.
mimi yoon replied
these are exact words i’d use to describe your work, ehivar… it means so much to me, because through your art and writing, i learned that you’re a thinker of great depth…. thank you so so much, ehivar… : )
Lisa Jewell
Incredible combination of image and poem….
I can’t help but wonder what it would be like to be boxed without so much as a slither of sky to be seen or felt.
Hmmmmm
XOXO
mimi yoon replied
that would be horrible… choking…. insanely painful until one adjusts or adapts to the condition, because we have that ability to adapt…. then it will be sad… what an ugly and sad thought though…
let’s imagine beautiful and endless cyan sky with heaven’s clouds with the flavors of cotton candies… :P
thank you so much, beautiful…
xoxo
silverstrummer...
Brilliant image and design and your words also complete this dimentional artistry! Your just the best! – a fav for me – David :>))
mimi yoon replied
thank you dearly, david…. you are always the sweetest and the kindest commenter, and i always appreciate you… : )
Julian Escardo
It is indeed a very good architectural sculpture…....I like the light a lot – massive, great overlays and generally a darkness that invites mystery – I line the strong lines and the bolts on the blue structure combo!
mimi yoon replied
although it appears grand, the sculpture is not that big… i also love the strong lines and the bolts detail on the piece… you should one day visit sciarch… very very close from the hall…. i think you may find it interesting… i say ‘may’ because it’s not as chic and clean lined as the hall or the getty… thank you, julian… : )
ImagesFX
Ah to be talented with words and the painted image…...You, Mimi, are a very bright person….
mimi yoon replied
that’s a very kind compliment, image fx… it is truly appreciated… thank you thank you thank you !!! : )
JKKimball
this is such wonderful art Mimi! love it!
mimi yoon replied
thank you so much, john…. the sculpture and the building do not, but for some reason, this image has much asian flair to it… and i like it… thank you~ : )
deepbluwater
wonderfully layered image Mimi! love the words also & sense of mystery…
mimi yoon replied
thank you so very much, deep blue water… : )
bev langby
Interesting piece Mimi and great verse…......
mimi yoon replied
thank you bev…. it’s a capture of a part of an architectural sculpture and the ceiling of the building it’s displayed in… and i’m make believing them ocean waves and the sky… ;P
Novice
a departure from your norm…well done
mimi yoon replied
just a photo with some textures… thank you, novice… : )
cathrinedp
can you tell me where your limit lies? I don’t think you have one xxx
Ushna Sardar
ghumphr1
interesting lays and textures – xXx
tomrhody
Excellent work!
mimi yoon replied
thank you so dearly, tom… i appreciate your compliment… : )
Helen Chierego
Love the colours and shapes!
UnEasy
”...she knew she was there to catch silent whispers
but she could not remember who’s…” WOW
Brilliant image, with an equally poignant and compelling poem. Kudos mimi.