Dear Friends
Would you come with me?
Featured: 1620 – 13th July 2009
Freedom To Shine – 13th July 2009
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To embark on a journey of self discovery
To discover a self i never knew in me
Ill look into a pond and see in its reflection
A girl i never knew, a person renewed
The glassy cover washing away the dirt and filth
Revealing a new self
Ill climb a mountain and when i reach the top
Ill touch the sky and the clouds above
Ill be enlightened and ever true
Ill never look for the girl i once knew
The girl who hid from all around her
Too scared to emerge from her surroundings
Ill swim in the ocean and drown in its embrace
The cool languid sea that i have never seen
Rinse me and remove all that was there
A clean, untouched mirror in which to stare
No scratches or marks just crystal clear.
Ill run through the forest at the speed of light
And feel my emotions melt from sight
Warm and happy is how ill emerge
Like a butterfly from a cocoon
Hung in mid air
Ill bathe myself in sunlight in the golden rays
And breath in the scent with which ill be amazed
Skin kissed with the warm loving touch
Life has been given as though its just begun
Mother Earth has given me a new lease on life
When i was in deep times of darkness and strife
Breath in the scent of all thats around
Be amazed by the subtle sounds
Let yourself feel what you never thought possible
In this hollow shell in which your soul dwells
We have something amazing and we dont even know
Let yourself feel it, let yourself go
Discover a side that you never knew
The free, loving spirit deep inside your soul
Lynn Moore
Mika – this is so beautiful, it flows like rain water down a window – smooth and lovely, soothing and inviting. Yes, I’ll come with you!
Mika replied
Thanks Lynn! :)
littlestmonkey
Yes, this is a lovely poem and very enticing….I’ve tried to find myself, but there is so much more yet, still undiscovered.
Mika replied
Same with me! I hope one day i discover more :)
JRGarland
This is truly awesome. To find one’s self is a goal everyone has and the quest may take a lifetime to discover, but we all must take that trip. Well done.
Mika replied
:) thanks a mill JR!
Its a journey ive started many times but have yet to complete
Impassioned
Wow, that’s beautiful!
Mika replied
Ah wow thank you Mark!
Very much appreciated!
kaberoo
fantastic ? emotional and questioning
Mika replied
:) thanks so much!
Rhenastarr
Beautiful flowing words of discovery. Well written.
Mika replied
Thank you so very much :)
Much appreciated
solareclips~Ju...
Mika replied
Ah wow thank you a mill Julia!
So awesome :)
aspectsoftmk
touch my heart…

Mika replied
Oh wow!
Two on one what an amazing way to start the day!!!!