The End
A little poem about the end of life.
Not my life but what do people going through massive problems think?
Maybe this?
Featured:The Art of Pain – 13th July 2009
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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Bubblettes, Everyday Life, Freedom to Shine, Safe Haven, Shameless Self-Promotion, The Art of Pain, The beauty of poetry, THE SISTERHOOD, The true beauty, Up & Coming Writers and WMGWhat would you do if your number was up
If you suddenly found yourself on the edge
There is no one to talk to
No one to trust
And nothing to tell you no
So very tempting to take one step
A single step too far
No turning back
No rewind
Nothing to keep you there
If life had a mission and you failed completely
Is there any use carrying on?
If death and submission were the only tradition
Would you break it and make your own?
If love was a curse and you loved all your life
Would you go insane?
If everyone you cared for suddenly turned silent
Would there be any use carrying on?
So many questions
Too few answers
How do we know which to take?
The highway of life has come to a sudden stop
The barriers are there
The warning lights are flashing
Drive on?
Drive on!
p.s. eliot
give me strength
made me think of this song for some reason
Mika replied
That is one awesome song by one of my favorite artists of all time!
Nice Eliot!
bee23
I like this, very well written and relatable.
Mika replied
Ah wow thank you! kindly
Peter Lessey
To fail is when one has never tried in the first place. One never fail completely, it is just a fall and we just have to pick ourselves up and either carry on and learn from the last fall.
There is always someone listening and or will to listen but i pne will to truly talk.
Life is a highway and we all do reach barries but remember that you are never alon jut look a little closer and you see. Only your finger is one the stop button to turn off the warning lights because if you don’t someone may follow.
Your written word are formed from emotions that paints a picture to clear to egnore.
Well written Mika.
Very expressed – Peter
Mika replied
So true Peter!
Sometimes though we lose sight of our goals so much that there is little to recover from it
And the only very tempting step is to the side and right over the edge, ive felt like that alot but not recently.
Im glad you like it :)
Thanks a million!
Kathleen Whitty
I can absolutely understand and more than empathise . Whether that was written from the heart or ‘hypothetically’ I think that is beautifully written
Mika replied
Thanks Kathleen!
I appreciate it :)
Totally written both from the heart and head
But im not too sure about who yet >.<
JRGarland
This was very powerfully written indeed. I hate to see anyone in that condition. I’ve been there too many times myself. I may not be able to figure out why I carry on, but I do. Let’s see if it is worth it. Well done.
Mika replied
Thanks so much JR!
Appreciate the words and the wisdom!
I know ill get through it, just not sure when >.<
Shoaib .
powerful write here mika… thats one step you can never take back
i ve had freinds make it… contemplate it, and not take it
this one hits home for me
great job
Mika replied
Thanks again Shoaib!
I too have had friends take that step and never come back, so sad to see
I hope that now though more people have their eyes open to it :)
Vanessa Anderberg
Wonderful…powerful writing.
Mika replied
Thank you a million Vanessa!
colorblind
DRIVE ON!!!!
I felt this piece
like everyone else is saying ….this is a powerful piece
to penetrate thru one’s heart and clinch you
is true power
nicely composed
Mika replied
Wow thank you so much!
Man that piece of art work is spectacular!
Thanks so much for the comment and the awesome pick!
Peace
ArcadiaTempest
You pose big questions in this deep verse…..well crafted to really shed light on a subject that some would rather shy from. Some people are always in an ‘up’ mood and some struggle with the moods that can take them unawares….at the end of the day both are just people doing the best they can in their lives. This was an important piece of writing…I say well done for putting it out there. X
Mika replied
Tahnk you, thank you!
For reading it and leaving such an awesome comment!
It sucks getting caught unawares and the journey can sometimes be a rough one, i just hope that i come out on top every time other wise who knows >.<
Thankies!
Gregory John O...
Fortuna Favet Fortibus
Mika replied
=D your right!
Erika .
Wow, Mika….this is a really profound poem. I really like the questions you asked. So thought provoking. x
Mika replied
Ah wow thank you so much dear friend!
I really appreciate it :)
Julialala
Congrats! You’ve been featured in The Art Of Pain
Mika replied
What an awesome way to start my uni day! Thank you so much Julia!
skinnyman
so well expressed. excellently explored. love it.:)
Mika replied
Thanks a milly mate!
Thomas Simunsen
I have been on this same ledge Mika, I know the view only too well.
This is well put and I can feel your emotion. Great writing
Thomas Simunsen
read 2 poems on my page and you may have an insight Mika. Darkness and The Demons will Win.