Unhappy
I have no idea!
Its one of those mindless things
I think you can tell with how it turned out
That im not happy right now
Featured: The Beauty of Poetry – July 10th 2009
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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, If it doesn't belong, On Youth, The beauty of poetry and THE SISTERHOODWhat isnt true is never there
No matter how much you want it to be
What lives in rhymes and fantasy
Is invisible and hard to see
What you think you know
Think again theres something that your missing
As small as it may be your looking straight through
Your looking straight through me!
Im not so quiet that im invisible
Im not so dull that im unbelievable
Im not so stupid that im gullible
But at this stage im vulnerable
Look at the marks, the marks all over
Tell me what you see!
Is it self harm, reality or is it all just a bloody dream
I think i feel it, i think i know
But i never, ever bleed
Perhaps my tears have all dried up
The dams are all but dead.
With this breath that ive held in, the longer that i wait
The more it presses on my lungs the heavier it becomes
My heart is breaking piece by piece
The shards they pierce my soul
I never listened to my intuition and look at where i am!
I soulless being from your deepest dream
A whisper
A breeze
A sound
Gregory John O...
wonderful piece….. ( I hope happiness reurns soon…. with the world as it is, we have to get sad occassionally or we go mad..)
Mika replied
Thanks Gregory :)
A new day brings new smiles and new reasons to be happy :)
I found them today :) lol
Shoaib .
Im not so quiet that im invisible
Im not so dull that im unbelievable
Im not so stupid that im gullible
But at this stage im vulnerable
wow those line say it all
dont worry … you are hardly unseen …
i def admire u and ur work
shoaib
Mika replied
Aw wow thanks Shoaib!
That means a ton! Really :)
JRGarland
We make ourselves vulnerable when we put so much of ourselves in the open. I applaud you for your bravery. Well done.
Mika replied
Thanks JR :)
I think i agree with that, in most aspects.
I have no idea what it is now, but it nags me endlessly
Erika .
whoa Mika….then end is just so powerful. It tugs at my soul….XXX
I hope you feel better soon.
Mika replied
Thanks a million Erika :)
I hope i do too, feeling like this is a real dampner on writing >.<
Lol
Impassioned
You are seen…I see you…keep expressing please…
Mika replied
Ah thanks for the reassurance Mark!
Much appreciated
Hannah Fenton-...
This was just featured in
The beauty of poetry
Mika replied
Thank you so so much!
Corydon
Some pretty good lines.
Really picks up at “Look at the marks, the marks all over” and continues through.
Mika replied
Thanks :)
Appreciated loads!
Mary Campbell
Nice, I’m moved by this.
Mika replied
aw wow thats awesome!
Thanks =D