I visited hell the other day ...........

mick8585
Author: mick8585
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It could be argued that I was devoid of inspiration but the yellow brick road recently led me to the sports bar at Crown Casino.
Hard drinkin and hard gamblin were the norm here. 2.30pm Friday I think ( no windows and clocks here) , bore witness to desperate men and dodgy behaviour. At least they served Johnny Black for the asking.
The Orwellian monster screens gave one an excuse to concentrate on your drinking and not have to converse. The purpose of having three screens simultaneously showing American basketball, one day cricket and Wangaratta trots always mystified me. How the hell can I gain inspiration here?
I partake of a tub chair knowing that to refill my glass allows some fat arse fool in my seat. So be it , I people watch.
An elderly Asian man snoring quietly beside me is approached by security. Two tall under 30’s that could have stepped out of Langley Virginia grabbed an arm each. It was reminiscent of crackin a wishbone, I wonder who will win?
“No sleepin pop, you gotta go”, one sneered. I crunched my scotch soaked ice, angry at his treatment.
“Bastards”, I hissed. They frogmarched him away.
This place is hell on wheels. The red carpet and garish decor screams 666 at me. I come to the conclusion its wall to wall pain here, all in the guise of winning cash and dyin one minute at a time.
I go.

I visited hell the other day ...........

Crown casino, an exercise in sociology at the best of times.

I visited hell the other day ........... belongs to the following groups:

Melbourne & Victoria
  • lianne

    lianne, 4 months ago

    Superb picture! well done!

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 4 months ago

    This is fantastic writing Mick. Just wonderful, and I agree wholeheartedly. Their product is ‘your pain, our gain’! I hate that gambling came to Victoria. Let the seniors take a bus to NSW for their weekends away. Hate it (and occasionally get sucked in by it too).

  • mick8585

    mick8585, 4 months ago

    Thanks Lianne.

  • mick8585

    mick8585, 4 months ago

    Thanks Anne. A dreadful place that I visit sometimes, just to sneer at.

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 4 months ago

    Your superb writing illustrates a very sad and lonely reality for some people….

    As a person with an addictive personality – I’m glad I’ve managed to stay away from gambling….
    Now if I could give up the other two addictions that could so easily evolve into the scene you’ve written about…

  • mick8585

    mick8585, 4 months ago

    I seem to have this ethnographic leaning at the moment. Its about observing the details and getting it down as good as possible. It helps to like people though, they interest me.

  • staz89

    staz89, 2 months ago

    Descriptive to the end, I love it

  • mick8585

    mick8585 in reply to staz89’s comment, about 1 month ago

    Thanks for stopping by staz.

  • warmonger62

    warmonger62, about 1 month ago

    WOW Stunning writing… I felt I was actually there as I read your work. You are not just a writer, but an artist gifted with word-craft. Keep up the great work

  • mick8585

    mick8585, about 1 month ago

    Thanks W. Really detest the place as you may have guessed.

  • Carmen  Cilliers

    Carmen Cilliers, about 1 month ago

    Brilliant! It’s the same in all casinos. In South Africa the poor kids sit in crowded huddles outside the doors while the parents desperately gamble away their months pay. The groceries have not yet been done. Men leer and woman gaze around with glassy eyes. Yes, it’s another room in hell.

  • mick8585

    mick8585 in reply to Carmen Cilliers’s comment, about 1 month ago

    Greed tends to have a continuity I suppose . Thanks for stopping by.

  • alfie

    alfie, about 1 month ago

    like it a lot – says so much with so few words. took me straight there – impressive writing

  • mick8585

    mick8585 in reply to alfie’s comment, about 1 month ago

    Thanks Alfie.

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