white line fever

mick8585
Author: mick8585
Word Count: 149
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white line fever

in pub toilets near you now.

The credit card felt gritty against the plastic window in his wallet. Two luscious lines snaked across the toilet roll dispenser. Right boot against the door and right hand against the wall, he bowed to the job at hand. He loved how bars now provided two sizes of drink straw. The smaller fitted in his breast pocket snugly.
It always amused him that smoke detectors were installed in the toilets to detect smokers, when tens of grams disappeared up noses, right under their noses.
Fuckin ironic that.
Another cubicle door slammed shut not four away. A fumbled latch and a gutteral growl echoed off the tiles. What sounded like a projectile vomit suitably splashed and plopped in symphony with the growl.
” Someone could’nt stay the pace ”, he thought.
Synapses now cooking, the doof doof seemed to appeal again. Daylight in one hour. Bed in one and a half.

  • Melissa Vowell

    Melissa Vowell

    Your writing is amazing every time! I’m hooked now, keep it coming!

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    Okay, you’ve hooked me. Waiting for the next chapter . . . .

  • mick8585

    mick8585

    Its an itch Im trying to scratch.

  • Mark German

    Mark Germancommunity host

    Nice writing, Mick. I haven’t been following this side of your stuff. Must change that – you really have a lot of talent.

  • mick8585

    mick8585

    Thanks Mark. Its flowing freely at the moment. Just goin with the flow.

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