Recital
A recital of music,
my sisters last concert of her course
Recital belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, PhilosophicalI sat there silently
my breath barely making a mark in the air
I watched you proudly
you stood, so strong, so happy.
I listened attentively
the sounds wrapping fingers round my ears
I blinked slowly
The music vibrating from tone to tone.
I felt reverb
The lack of beat allowed the syncopation
I let my eyes dance
The movement of the days told audibly.
I relax visibly,
You played on, never faltering, never tiring.
I let my ears listen
You pause at the end to bow, and leave your stage.
Jessica Tremp
that’s a wonderful tribute Michael
Jo O'Brien
I love how this connects with all my senses.
Lisa Jewell
Melody of admiration….
Beautiful work….
kseriphyn
Yes, just like listening to a concert pianist play an encore and inviting all the senses. Well written poem.
MissKristy
Ahh..the magic of music. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful experience.
Eleni Sofroniou
So beautiful
lynauklet
Yay! Finally an original topic in the writing forums! It’s high time.
Suzanne German
what a performance – and the one on stage sounds good to!! :))
SG
loramae
Bravo then!...;) So sweet to see and realize with a friend or family member…their dreams. Sweet!
Trish Cooper
Brilliant!!!
Luckyvegetable
stop making me cry dammit!
=)