Bliss

Silver light of love skips across taught skin of hunger
Moonlight song of lust and wonder
Sing along my body with words of ocean bliss
Smoothing out goosebumps with a butterfly kiss
Strings of life’s fingers play
Cornucopia of delightful delay
Whispering tree song through my body flows
As the river runs and my spirit glows

  • wigs

    wigs

    wow this is soooo beautiful Shelly…... love it

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Oh Helen :) You are so wonderful…thanks for your support :)

  • David Holmes

    David Holmes

    great work Shelly :-))

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Hey David :) Glad you like this and thank you :)

  • Mudsoldat

    Mudsoldat

    yeah dude..nailed that one beautifully…so many sweet images in your clever vision phrasing too… i feel the moon and light wind with there shadow moans…and the excellent discovery of devine pure touch of peaking flesh…mmm Mudman

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    How dare you compete with my poem with such a beautifully written comment Mud lol :) I’ve got a long ways to catch up with you but I really appreciate your kind words and your wonderful support! Thank you very much my dear friend :)

  • raymondo

    raymondo

    Beautiful…

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Thanks so much Ray :)

  • Denis Dalby

    Denis Dalby

    Some sensual analogies here Shell. I like it.

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    I appreciate your kind comment Denis and I’m glad you see that in this :) Cheers :)

  • grimduke1

    grimduke1

    Lovely piece of prose Shelly. You’re getting good at this writing lark! Really nice work with a lot of feeling!

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Many thanks Kerry :) I love your support :)

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    I really like the conjured images through your words. Lovely.

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Pretty thrilling for me to hear from a man of your talent on this Cassidy :) Thank you very kindly :)

  • kjgordon
  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Just letting me know you were here?! :)

  • Nathalie Chaput

    Nathalie Chaput

    Beautiful Poem Shelly!

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Thank you Nat :)

  • SanjaXOXO

    SanjaXOXO

    I like the word play here….how can I not love something with the word Cornucopia in it?? MWAH

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Well thank you Miss Sanja :) Don’t you just love that word?! Say it ten times in a row really fast….dare ya :D BIG hug for the fave too hun :) xoxo

  • Matt Bottos

    Matt Bottos

    wonderful! Really well written!

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Heya Matt! Very kind of you to check this out and comment…..thank you :)

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    wow this is great shelly … beautifullllllllllllllllyyy done…
    such sweet images… great work here !!!

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Oh Shoaib…....you have NO idea how much your feedback on my writing means to me! All of this is YOUR fault lol! But seriously, I do thank you so much for encouraging me to write. Although I am worlds away from you, I am having fun with it, and I really, really, really appreciate your wonderful support. Thank you SO much my beautiful friend :)

  • trwoody

    trwoody

    Shelly that is absolutely perfect. A divine interpretation of consummate joy

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Thank you very much tr! That is such a lovely comment and thank you for taking the time to read this and pass on your thoughts :)

  • Teacup

    Teacup

    Blissful words Shelley… beautiful. x

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Thank you very kindly Teacup :)

  • Mudsoldat

    Mudsoldat

    my pleasure S and a piss funny chuckle i had at your reply too…:)))

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    :) Ahhhhhh you make me smile really big Mud Man ;) Thank you sooooooooo much again for your ongoing encouragement with my writing :)

  • wigs
  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    HELENNNNNNNNNNNN! Thank you HUGE time for this feature! You have no idea how much it means to me! If you were here right now I would give you the biggest hug :) Thank you, thank you, thank you! xxxx

  • MagpieMagic

    MagpieMagic

    Gorgeous, love the words that feel like whispering touches. :-)

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    What a beautiful comment MM :) Cheers to you :)

  • lupa

    lupa

    oooooh….”sigh”

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    That’s a lovely response lupa :) Thank you :)

  • Christopher Wren Raggatt

    Christopher Wr...

    Beautifully captured essence of love.

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    I really appreciate your time and thoughts on this adelechanel. Many thanks to you :)

  • skinnyman

    skinnyman

    beautiful :)

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Thank you Peter :)

  • kashmirecho

    kashmirecho

    Congrats on the feature!!! :)

  • Shelly Hiebert replied

    Thank you so much :)

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses 24 days ago

    Shelly! this is just so beautiful! like the soft touch of a butterfly wing on the heart. Gentle and lovely work. xoxo

  • Shelly Hiebert replied 22 days ago

    Your comments are more beautiful than anything I could ever write Christie :) Thanks so much for your lovely comment :)

  • valentina63

    valentina63 24 days ago

    And like the river this poem flows beautifully …..as for the content ….tender,sensual and sublime!!!! .Wonderful work and a well deserved feature . Congrats!! :)

  • Shelly Hiebert replied 22 days ago

    Oh wow Valentina…..what a gorgeous comment…..thank you very kindly :)

  • Andrew Bailey

    Andrew Bailey 24 days ago

    Oh yes! Oh yes! That is superb. More please :-))))))

  • Shelly Hiebert replied 21 days ago

    Thank you so much Andrew :) I am new to this so any feedback is greatly appreciated :)

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock 22 days ago

    Your words are having a blissful time in this piece..excellent marriage of words.

  • Shelly Hiebert replied 21 days ago

    Oh man Chris! I read your comment just now and jumped off my chair and did the ‘stir the pot’ dance and then did the ‘raise the roof’ dance and then did a few other crazy moves that I can’t even describe :D Support from YOU on my written work is huuuuuuge for me! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

  • Jason  Sinner

    Jason Sinner 21 days ago

    Whispering tree song through my body flows… Oh I love it.
    You have talent, yep yep.

  • Shelly Hiebert replied 20 days ago

    Very kind of you Jason :) Writing is new to me so I really appreciate your feedback on this :) Cheers :)

  • linaji

    linaji 18 days ago


    This has been featured from 11-15 thru 11-22

  • Shelly Hiebert replied 17 days ago

    Awesome! Thank you SO very much Linaji :) xxxx

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