Bliss
Featured in The beauty of poetry
Featured in Vibration in Art and Verse-VAVoom!
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! 100% !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Everyday Life, First Things, Freedom In Words & Art, Friends of RedBubble, If it doesn't belong, Moms 4 Art, Shameless Self-Promotion, The beauty of poetry, The Sensual Word, THE SISTERHOOD, The true beauty, Up & Coming Writers, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!, Woman Appreciation and Writing: Persuing HappinessSilver light of love skips across taught skin of hunger
Moonlight song of lust and wonder
Sing along my body with words of ocean bliss
Smoothing out goosebumps with a butterfly kiss
Strings of life’s fingers play
Cornucopia of delightful delay
Whispering tree song through my body flows
As the river runs and my spirit glows
wigs
wow this is soooo beautiful Shelly…... love it
Shelly Hiebert replied
Oh Helen :) You are so wonderful…thanks for your support :)
David Holmes
great work Shelly :-))
Shelly Hiebert replied
Hey David :) Glad you like this and thank you :)
Mudsoldat
yeah dude..nailed that one beautifully…so many sweet images in your clever vision phrasing too… i feel the moon and light wind with there shadow moans…and the excellent discovery of devine pure touch of peaking flesh…mmm Mudman
Shelly Hiebert replied
How dare you compete with my poem with such a beautifully written comment Mud lol :) I’ve got a long ways to catch up with you but I really appreciate your kind words and your wonderful support! Thank you very much my dear friend :)
raymondo
Beautiful…
Shelly Hiebert replied
Thanks so much Ray :)
Denis Dalby
Some sensual analogies here Shell. I like it.
Shelly Hiebert replied
I appreciate your kind comment Denis and I’m glad you see that in this :) Cheers :)
grimduke1
Lovely piece of prose Shelly. You’re getting good at this writing lark! Really nice work with a lot of feeling!
Shelly Hiebert replied
Many thanks Kerry :) I love your support :)
Cassidy JK (Ra...
I really like the conjured images through your words. Lovely.
Shelly Hiebert replied
Pretty thrilling for me to hear from a man of your talent on this Cassidy :) Thank you very kindly :)
kjgordon
kj
Shelly Hiebert replied
Just letting me know you were here?! :)
Nathalie Chaput
Beautiful Poem Shelly!
Shelly Hiebert replied
Thank you Nat :)
SanjaXOXO
I like the word play here….how can I not love something with the word Cornucopia in it?? MWAH
Shelly Hiebert replied
Well thank you Miss Sanja :) Don’t you just love that word?! Say it ten times in a row really fast….dare ya :D BIG hug for the fave too hun :) xoxo
Matt Bottos
wonderful! Really well written!
Shelly Hiebert replied
Heya Matt! Very kind of you to check this out and comment…..thank you :)
Shoaib .
wow this is great shelly … beautifullllllllllllllllyyy done…
such sweet images… great work here !!!
Shelly Hiebert replied
Oh Shoaib…....you have NO idea how much your feedback on my writing means to me! All of this is YOUR fault lol! But seriously, I do thank you so much for encouraging me to write. Although I am worlds away from you, I am having fun with it, and I really, really, really appreciate your wonderful support. Thank you SO much my beautiful friend :)
trwoody
Shelly that is absolutely perfect. A divine interpretation of consummate joy
Shelly Hiebert replied
Thank you very much tr! That is such a lovely comment and thank you for taking the time to read this and pass on your thoughts :)
Teacup
Blissful words Shelley… beautiful. x
Shelly Hiebert replied
Thank you very kindly Teacup :)
Mudsoldat
my pleasure S and a piss funny chuckle i had at your reply too…:)))
Shelly Hiebert replied
:) Ahhhhhh you make me smile really big Mud Man ;) Thank you sooooooooo much again for your ongoing encouragement with my writing :)
wigs
Shelly Hiebert replied
HELENNNNNNNNNNNN! Thank you HUGE time for this feature! You have no idea how much it means to me! If you were here right now I would give you the biggest hug :) Thank you, thank you, thank you! xxxx
MagpieMagic
Gorgeous, love the words that feel like whispering touches. :-)
Shelly Hiebert replied
What a beautiful comment MM :) Cheers to you :)
lupa
oooooh….”sigh”
Shelly Hiebert replied
That’s a lovely response lupa :) Thank you :)
Christopher Wr...
Beautifully captured essence of love.
Shelly Hiebert replied
I really appreciate your time and thoughts on this adelechanel. Many thanks to you :)
skinnyman
beautiful :)
Shelly Hiebert replied
Thank you Peter :)
kashmirecho
Congrats on the feature!!! :)
Shelly Hiebert replied
Thank you so much :)
Christie Moses 24 days ago
Shelly! this is just so beautiful! like the soft touch of a butterfly wing on the heart. Gentle and lovely work. xoxo
Shelly Hiebert replied 22 days ago
Your comments are more beautiful than anything I could ever write Christie :) Thanks so much for your lovely comment :)
valentina63 24 days ago
And like the river this poem flows beautifully …..as for the content ….tender,sensual and sublime!!!! .Wonderful work and a well deserved feature . Congrats!! :)
Shelly Hiebert replied 22 days ago
Oh wow Valentina…..what a gorgeous comment…..thank you very kindly :)
Andrew Bailey 24 days ago
Oh yes! Oh yes! That is superb. More please :-))))))
Shelly Hiebert replied 21 days ago
Thank you so much Andrew :) I am new to this so any feedback is greatly appreciated :)
Trenchtownrock 22 days ago
Your words are having a blissful time in this piece..excellent marriage of words.
Shelly Hiebert replied 21 days ago
Oh man Chris! I read your comment just now and jumped off my chair and did the ‘stir the pot’ dance and then did the ‘raise the roof’ dance and then did a few other crazy moves that I can’t even describe :D Support from YOU on my written work is huuuuuuge for me! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Jason Sinner 21 days ago
Whispering tree song through my body flows… Oh I love it.
You have talent, yep yep.
Shelly Hiebert replied 20 days ago
Very kind of you Jason :) Writing is new to me so I really appreciate your feedback on this :) Cheers :)
linaji 18 days ago
This has been featured from 11-15 thru 11-22
Shelly Hiebert replied 17 days ago
Awesome! Thank you SO very much Linaji :) xxxx