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shout shout
shout down the night
shout down the night
pop pop
pop a cap
bang goes the drum
bang goes the gong
shout shout
shout down the night
shout down the night
blue hangs the afternoon
all through the morning on
from the dawn
down through the day
down through the light
shout shout
shout down the night
shout down the night
pop pop
pop a cap
bang goes the drum
bang goes the gong
pop pop
pop a cap
bang goes the drum
bang goes the gong
down through the day
down from the dawn
down through the light
down through the night
shout shout
shout down the night
shout down the night
pop pop
pop a cap
bang goes the drum
bang goes the gong
pop pop
pop a cap
bang goes the gong
bang goes the drum
shout down the night
shout down the night

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Comments

  • Norma-jean Morrison
    Norma-jean Mor...almost 3 years ago

    good write my dear friend always Normaje

  • thankyou so much for faving this normaje. so glad that you liked it and had fun with it. definitely a fun write to start the weekend doing it from scratch this morning. really great fun improvising this one from whole cloth. really great to see that you enjoyed it.

    – mhkantor

  • linaji
    linajialmost 3 years ago

    lends such a perspective of what you feel… so well expressed M

  • thankyou so much for faving this one lina. so glad that you enjoyed this and had fun with it. fun improv write to start the weekend. really great to see that you liked this one.

    – mhkantor

  • bobart
    bobartalmost 3 years ago
    I LIKE YOUR WORDS, THEY HAVE A NICE FLOW TO THEM. I THINK THEY WOULD WORK WELL TOGETHER WITH THE IMAGES, AS IN SOME CASES THEY ALREADY DO.
  • thankyou so much for faving this jai. so glad that you liked it. what a fun improv write. yes, the title especially could go with a pic and some of the lines an inset perhaps. also hear music with this one, maybe jazz like a tong funeral (forget exact title or whose album but remember the music) or blues. great influences, references, and inferences here in the rhythm (langston hughes comes to mind among others like gregory corso or patchen or ginsberg even kerouac etc. – all afterthoughts and not thought of at all during the writing). really great to see that you had fun and enjoyed this one.

    – mhkantor

  • ellamental
    ellamentalalmost 3 years ago

    it’s all good “Rap” out here in LA. the title is phenomenal !!!!

  • thankyou so much for faving this ella. so glad that you enjoyed and had fun. all fun doing this one. really great to see that you liked it.

    – mhkantor

  • Karen Gingell
    Karen Gingellalmost 3 years ago

    really powers along – great rhythm

  • thankyou so much karen. so glad that you liked this and enjoyed it. a really fun write on so many levels to say the least. really great to see that you had fun with this one.

    – mhkantor

  • Belinda "BillyLee" NYE (Printmaker)
    Belinda "Billy...almost 3 years ago

    FAbulous, loved reading the whole thing. Well written. B

  • thankyou so much belinda. so glad that you liked this and had fun with it. definitely a fun write in so many ways. really great to see that you enjoyed this one.

    – mhkantor

  • reflector
    reflectoralmost 3 years ago

    It sounds like Pure Bedlam! A creative and yet sad portrayal of the world we have to live in nowadays. Lot’s of activity and action – but it’s all the wrong type of Nirvana for the sensible one’s.

  • thankyou so much for your comment reflector. i’m so glad that you found this involving. i find this almost timeless in some ways. at least of yesterday and today. a fun write to say the least. really great to see that you found it worth the read.

    – mhkantor

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