Giving It To You
Giving It To You belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Bubblettes and WMGTake it from me.
Oh Yes.
I will give it as hard and as long and as best I can… and in the end you will be fulfilled and I will be emptied and cast aside.
Just like last time.
So I will beg and I will crawl and I will feed on every dirty piece of it I can find until some semblance of worthy dashes across the barren wastelands of my mind.
Until the agony subsides and is replaced with a dull, constant, lifeless ache.
Until I am no longer perpetually concious of my heart.
Then, I will give it to you as hard and as long and as best I can…
Oh Yes.
Take it from me…
Crockpot
Well said.
Sounds all too familiar….
bodymechanic
it’s a way of life that we all wish to perpetuate!!
Suzanne German
guts – rawness – splendid literary piece!
Suzanne German
Melissa I sincerely hope that writing is one of your life plans – honestly your writing rocks!
Jen Whyte
Raw pain …. endlessly written … beaituful
Jose Armstrong
Is there pleasure in pain? Although lovely written and as raw as I have seen, I worry about your mental health after reading a few pieces you wrote. I hope you keep dumping your pain on paper and keep your mental sanity intact.
T. W. Gates
That is awesome Mellisa.
Good thing i know you well enough to know your alleady insane. LOL
take care.
namaste