Introspection
Introspection belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, PhilosophicalShe lies there,
purposefully twirling a lock of velvet sea,
Black as night.
Black as night,
yet pure in comparison
to the blackest recesses of her heart.
I know her name,
but she’s hoping i won’t remember it,
and i can’t decide what’s more enticing…
The finesse of perfectly sculpted black curls…
Or the silent invisible tears,
stinging her cheeks,
playing on her eyelashes,
and burning rivers in my heart.
– Melissa Vowell
ozjami
wow riveting!!Excellant piece Melissa!
Lisa Jewell
” I know her name,
but she’s hoping i won’t remember it,”
Pefect…..this poem says much more than it says….
Suzanne German
gruesome…awesome…good!
pauldrobertson
lovely, miss melissa
Durotriges
very evocative. great imagery, Mel!
brummieboy
Utterly beautiful …....
Suzanne German
...did i say gruesome?.....not sure why…..i meant dark…in the sense meaning ‘heavy’ ...been working too hard I think my brain has gone AWOL…..
really like what you’ve written here Mel.
MissKristy
Intocxicating!!
I love love love from ‘and I can’t decide what’s more enticing…” onwards…that just really speaks to me.
JustSixties
I’ve decided that you’re the adjective queen…...........this is great stuff Mel.
Adriana Glackin
FAR OUT!
ChainmailChick
Striking work.
Avery Etherine
Great work, i like your style
Leon Walker
This is very nice. Thank you.