My Everything

Melissa Vowell
Author: Melissa Vowell
Word Count: 50
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If we were allowed it
you and I
we would count each other’s sighs.

Forget that there is a
difference
between heaven and your eyes.

Climb one another’s faults
til our love
surpasses even the lies.

Loving on forever
together
til our roses have all died.

- Melissa Vowell

My Everything

Just so you know – amidst all this depressing writing I do – I am in love!

My Everything belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical
  • LisaG

    LisaG, 10 months ago

    Mel, how beautiful and deeply loving….

    “Climb one another’s faults
    til our love
    surpasses even the lies.”

    That is true love…..

  • MattT

    MattT, 10 months ago

    What sort of roses are you writing about and what do you feed them on?
    I use horse or bull manure on mine

  • Melissa Vowell

    Melissa Vowell, 10 months ago

    when you die people lay roses upon your grave…

  • MattT

    MattT, 10 months ago

    I’m getting burried at sea…

  • Melissa Vowell

    Melissa Vowell, 10 months ago

    Good thing the poem’s not about you then Tiger ;)

  • loramae

    loramae, 10 months ago

    I think I maybe envious…lol…A touch to the body, spirit and mind…beautiful!

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 10 months ago

    nice poem of love melissa….like it lots!

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 10 months ago

    and….......nice to know you’re in love…....Enjoy!!!!

  • Tom Arnell

    Tom Arnell, 10 months ago

    :) I love you so much :) “til our roses have all died”

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin, 10 months ago

    Just so beautiful!

  • John Segon-Fisher,  RPA

    John Segon-Fis..., 10 months ago

    Excellent

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 10 months ago

    Beautiful girl…I am in awe of your passion…I just love it. HUGGS for you.

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