If I asked you really nicely…. would you hold my head under water for me?
Or would that be stretching the friendship? You always said whatever I needed you’d be there.
Well I need this. I need you to prove to me i’m alive. Drown me.
Fuck, Mel.Stop scaring me….
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Sorry Mark. Don’t be scared.
Is the drowning a symbol for life air? We live by breathing and we know we are alive because of it. Friendship is built on trust and trusting someone with your life air is the most precious. Nice writing Mel………….confronting but I think all good writing is.
You’re scaring me toooooooooooooooooooooooo – grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
JustSixties – :) nothing is literal, is it
Nice writing? That sounded so lame for something so powerful.
Words have power……even when used metaphorically…..why bother using them if they don’t have meaning and by meaning that is literal?
what I meant Lisa is, I’m not actually asking anyone to kill me
LOl…….I use to proofread for novelist back in my younger days when I was broke. I learnt that writing is never literal, it is taken from the soul, turned around and made into what it needs to be. Every writer gives a little of themselves in their writing (experiences, hopes, dreams), but we must never mistake it for reality. You are a gifted writer.
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