i was wrong she says
to ignore the sparks
our chemistry is almost unerving
im ready now to take u in
the look in her eyes reassuring
chemistry?!! sparks?!!!
woman! what you felt was my heart
as it burned alive for u time and again
i cannot forget the life that i wasted
praying for your eyes to b opened
u set fire to my soul
then doused it with scorn
marching ur righteousness all over my dreams
forgive you? forget you!!!!
neither as easy as you make them seem
how i longed for you
pining for what i couldnt have
but now that i have u
i see i dont want you
the wounds not yet healed
the scars still fresh
i wont risk being ripped open once again
roybarry
Powerful, emotive and so, so good.
Great writing.
melissa spalding replied
thanx,that means alot to me
shall
i can relate so to this work, a very emotionally honest piece, ... i hope you stick to this sentiment and find a deserving love!
melissa spalding
thanks so much! im trying but it gets harder eacht iem im approached but like i siad im tring! lol
Rachael Hope
This is so elegant and stark. I love how much your soul is in this
melissa spalding replied
thanks, that was what i was going for. glad everyone can see that!