floor treatment

Megishere
Author: Megishere
Word Count: 45
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I recommend
painting your floor
not red like the door
which beckons you in
but brown like the mud
the muck and the crud
that sneaks past the mat
not on gloves or on hat
but clinging to shoes
that way you can’t lose

floor treatment

advice for the lazy housekeeper…like myself

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  • Rachael  Hope

    Rachael Hope, 5 months ago

    I really really like the rhyme scheme you’ve got here and I really like the pace of it

  • greeneyedlady

    greeneyedlady, 4 months ago

    Boy, you said it! Each time I read this one, it goes faster and faster in my mind. I love it!

  • Megishere

    Megishere in reply to greeneyedlady’s comment, 4 months ago

    Thank you! It was quick and fun to write:-)
    XXXMeg

  • Patricia Montgomery

    Patricia Montg..., 4 months ago

    You spoke volumes for all of us sweeping and mopping after our families! Good job!

  • Megishere

    Megishere in reply to Patricia Montgomery’s comment, 4 months ago

    I did pick brown carpet for the hall and stairs….there’s one decision I have never come to regret. ha ha :) Thanks Patricia!
    xxxMeg

  • NuckleHeadSteph

    NuckleHeadSteph, 11 days ago

    haha! Any college kid’s choice of floor color. :-D Love it

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