Sink or Swim?

Megishere
Author: Megishere
Word Count: 56
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Sink or Swim?

just a thought…

Do starving people take their lives
or does the hunger make them strive?
Do drowning people fight to swim
or just give up and take it in?
perhaps we just have too much time
to self inspect, to moan and whine,
so skip a meal or take a swim,
and bless the life your living in.

  • stephfine

    stephfine

    That is well said! I love it… thanks! :-)

  • Megishere replied

    Thank you for reading …just a quick musing…:-) xxxxxMeg

  • stephfine

    stephfine

    Yup Yup, quick deliberation’s sometimes gives us the best well said thoughts…. :-)

  • Rachael  Hope

    Rachael Hope

    Oh wow I love this so much. I love the structure, the flow and the resolution is great. This is such an inspiring message. THANK YOU

  • lianne

    lianne

    Wonderful thought! Thank you for sharing it!

  • Alison Finch

    Alison Finch

    A great way to put ‘a thought’ into words. And very thought provoking too.

  • Megishere replied

    Thanks Alison! I’m trying to appreciate more and complain less…so far its working wonders! :-) xxxMeg

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