Verse 1
Everybody’s passing by
Without the time
for the time of day
Nobody painted the sky
Shadows are growing
To have their say
There’s whispers on the washing lines
Twisted in the wind
Gathering smoke from the embers
Of a dying day
Chorus
Somebody’s saving sunshine
(Somebody somewhere)
Somebody’s making hay
Somebody’s saving sunshine
For a rainy day
Verse 2
A girl is leaving town
Riding along on the hiraeth* train
Raindrops chasing down
A misty circle on the window pane
A suitcase full of promises
Packed with sad cliches
Leaving the child she used to be
To doorstep dreams
Chorus
Verse 3
Sitting in a bar
With a foaming dream of giro day
The money won’t go far
Two pennies are quickly rubbed away
He slowly swills the dregs around
In hope of charity
But his glass remains as empty
As the barman’s smile
Chorus
Verse 4
Wrapped in idle talk
Old men wander in to times long gone
The factory whistle’s call
And the rattle of the Spitfire’s song
They talk of war and dying
Re-live it all again
As they watch the children playing
At their soldiers’ games
Final chorus
Somebody’s saving sunshine
(Somebody somewhere)
Somebody’s making hay
Somebody’s saving sunshine
Bet it’s no-one down my way
*hiraeth – Welsh word for longing (usually for home)
Doorstep Dreams
A song
Sorry if you read the other version earlier – I’d typed the verses in the wrong order
Sean Farragher, 5 months ago
you are really gifted at this
Meach, 5 months ago
Many thanks Sean you’re very kind
cdwork, 5 months ago
Another awesome one. You are very clever with words
Meach in reply to cdwork’s comment, 5 months ago
Thanks CD it’s a thing I’ve always loved doing – I used to perform my stuff in pubs and clubs but lost all confidence in it for many years – it’s only since being on RedBubble that I’ve rediscovered the heart to publicise it
Gilberte, 5 months ago
Very poetic and observative
Meach in reply to Gilberte’s comment, 5 months ago
Thanks Gilberte you’re kind to me as always
LocoCow, 5 months ago
Catchy Chorus I can feel it
RoughDiamond, 5 months ago
You continue to astound me with your talent Meach. This is beautiful.
Irene Burdell, 5 months ago
Superb words .
Meach in reply to LocoCow’s comment, 5 months ago
I’ll look for it on your first album Bill :-)
Meach in reply to Irene Burdell’s comment, 5 months ago
Thanks Irene – as we say in Wales ‘You’re a good un’
LocoCow, 5 months ago
Would love to …
apjenkins, 5 months ago
Lovely work Meach !!
Meach, 5 months ago
Thanks Alice
wdavies285, 5 months ago
wonderful meach you have a real gift
Meach, 5 months ago
Thanks Wayne – very kind of you