My Vow
The vow of love from one to another
My Vow belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Inspired By Life, Up & Coming Writers and Writing: Persuing HappinessIn a world where nothing is certain
And hearts, they barely survive
I see in the distance one glimmer of hope
That makes me feel so alive
And nothing could ever stop this
The feeling I have, all the time
For knowing you’re near, my heart never fears
You make me feel so alive
I love your smile
And the way that it brightens
I love your touch
And the softness it brings
I love your look
As it appears to see through me
I love your lips
And the songs that they sing
And I love you….yes…I do
I never could see all of this coming
The power that you’d have over me
A life with just you is one which I’d choose
No other way that I’d wish be
I know in my heart you’re the reason
My life goes on day after day
I thank you my dear, for letting me hear
The words that you so often say
I love your smile
And the way that it brightens
I love your touch
And the softness it brings
I love your look
As it appears to see through me
I love your lips
And the songs that they sing
And I love you….yes…I do
There is never a tomorrow
Time has stopped, it’s always just now
The two of us here, with a love that’s sincere
Show’s the truth that we can’t disallow
I love your smile
And the way that it brightens
I love your touch
And the softness it brings
I love your look
As it appears to see through me
I love your lips
And the songs that they sing
And I love you….
yes…
I do
kimangeline
What a touching tribute to your love….beautiful Michael xo
Michael Degenh... replied
Thank you, I wasn’t sure how this attempt at lyrics would read or work out. Michael
cosimopiro
A beautiful song of love…..for love.
Michael Degenh... replied
Thank you my friend. Michael
Christie Moses
Oh Micheal, this is so sweet…such a song of beautiful love, pure and true. A fave for sure xxoo
Michael Degenh... replied
Christie, thank you so much, your words always mean the world to me. Michael
en-joy
Lovely, so lovely!!!!
Michael Degenh... replied
Thank you! Michael
Rhenastarr
So So lovely. A wondorus tribute to the love of your life. How beautifully you have written your feelings for all to see and share. How lovely to see a man express his love without fear of seeming unmanly. A definite fav my friend.
Michael Degenh... replied
Never afraid to express my feelings, thank you for your lovely remarks. Michael
JaneSolomon
What a beautiful love song Michael. A fave for me. xxx
Michael Degenh... replied
You are much too kind, Jane, thank you!
Cheryl Fugate
Like everyone above I thought the same as I was reading it … what a beautiful love song!!!! :) :) Very sweet indeed! :) :)
Michael Degenh... replied
Cheryl, I really appreciate your time and lovely thoughts on this write. They are intended as lyrics and I hop to have music for them soon. Thank you! Michael
lianne
This is utterly beautiful Michael – a love song, a tribute, a testament to love. I’ll be very keen to hear it set to music – it will be lovely I’m sure.
Michael Degenh... replied
I really appreciate that, thank you! Michael