• Tama Blough
    Tama Bloughover 5 years ago

    Nice light and color. I think I would crop it a little more closely – the background has so much jagged texture that it detracts from the model’s face – I think partly because the colors are so similar. If his face was in the section of brick that was whitewashed, it would stand out more. Hope you don’t mind a little critique but I have seen you be open to it before.

  • Hey Tama, totally open to be critiqued and i thank you for that, Have a look at Model shot 6, I think this is what you are meaning

    – David Petranker

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