N =® * [fp] * [ne] * [fl] * [fi] * [fc] * [L]
The realistic chance that intelligent life is exists
N =® * [rf] * [rs] * [rl] * [rm] * [rz] * [P] * [X]
The realistic chance that you and I will love each others kiss
And the reality of it is that we are in the midst
Between where probability and true love exists
No one wants to know more than one admits
And I confess I’m still showing you how it fits
The one thing Drake left out of his was risk
So here it is, the real chance that you will find my lips
So when you are in the midst of chaos and abyss
Keep your eyes open to the energy that my world emits
To fulfill love is what every human’s ultimate search is
That’s why the X factor in my equation is purpose
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Comments
Your rhyming in this piece is unreal. It feels like a rap. Is it supposed to? The whole equation plus the poem is really impressive.
its just supposed to feel good…
I usually always rhyme so a lot of my stuff sounds like rap i guess, but a lot deeper than going to the club and making money
– Shoaib .
I’ve read your other works, yet to comment on most, but this one in particular for some reason I felt with a beat. Who knows. I like it a lot.
ha i love it. its like math and science and poetry all put together. good work!
thats what i do baby
– Shoaib .
congrats on this novel concept
appreciate it
– Shoaib .
haha. you smooth criminal
haha
– Shoaib .
Great depth, unique in it’s own right.
lots going on in the head of mine
– Shoaib .
I can see that in your work.
thanks !
– Shoaib .
You are too smart for your own good……..great stuff you ;)
hahahaa oh ur to funny
– Shoaib .
Oh Shoaib you are an absolute scream….. this is so damn clever but it’s also so humorous….. now i’m curious….and wondering what you do for a living. It must be something to do with maths….or are you a scientist, perhaps? ;-))
mad scientist
– Shoaib .
You are awesome…love the upbeat tempo…love the concept of this poetry!!!!!!! oxoxoxoxox