Likely?

A valiant thorn no longer spikes and spears
A black veiled rose has rained upon his heart
Thorn softened by devouring all her tears
Rose hardened when her world was torn apart

When love’s goddess is hardened is there hope
Can flesh regrow upon a soulless bone?
Can softened thorn do more than simply grope?
Is it too much to want for things unknown?

Can god of endless power love for real?
Announcing in the valley of the Queens
Intent on just her precious heart to steal
He likes to think he knows now what love means

If Romeo and Juliet should live
What greater gift to lovers could one give?

© Matthew Penfold 2009

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As a result of a comment I left and then a double dare, yep that’s right, no ordinary dare, this is my attempt at a romantic response to a beautiful poem by Lisa Jewell: unlikely or

A sonnet seemed suitable to fit the bill :-)

Comments

  • DonDavisUK
    DonDavisUKover 5 years ago

    Wonderful indeed Matt, love the theme and the strong images in my mind as I read this, thorns, heartache, valley, hope, love. Great.

  • Thank you so much Don, It’s great to know that those images came through :-)

    – Matt Penfold

  • RaOrEmraeh
    RaOrEmraehover 5 years ago

    I LOVE this double dare response. Yay. Lol. It’s great.

  • LOL, thanks heaps Cassidy, can’t shake off a double dare ;-)

    – Matt Penfold

  • umbra
    umbraover 5 years ago

    it appears that matt is pitching woo…..
    well done…..

  • Pitching woo…..? I guess it does appear as such, I’d better be careful lol … Thank you Erich :-)

    – Matt Penfold

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 5 years ago

    When you take up a double dare you don’t muck around.

    sigh Matt this is the perfect romantic response.

    And indeed what greater gift. x

  • Thank you Lisa, so glad it hit the mark, it’s entirely fed by your words.
    Yep, nothing like attempting to rewrite tragedy :-) x

    – Matt Penfold

  • Cosimo Piro
    Cosimo Piroover 5 years ago

    Beautiful response to an equally beautiful poem….afraid it has to get down to looks, no matter how superficial that may sound.

  • Thanks Cos, such kind words. I’m not sure if it really has to get down to looks entirely, but to some extent that will happen…

    – Matt Penfold

  • Tomi10
    Tomi10over 5 years ago

    beautiful work, a perfect response.

  • Thanks Thomas, very much appreciated mate :-)

    – Matt Penfold

  • Teacup
    Teacupover 5 years ago

    beautiful indeed Matt – a great double dare, deuce me thinks! x

  • Thank you Alison, I’m really happy with that score LOL x

    – Matt Penfold

  • ambient-1
    ambient-1over 5 years ago

    Delightfully dancing dialog Matt! Inspiring work!

  • Lovely comment Robert, thanks so much mate :-)

    – Matt Penfold

  • raymondoantonio
    raymondoantonioover 5 years ago

    A SUPERB RESPONSE MATT!! BELLISSIMO!!! ENCORE!!

  • Good onya Ray, thanks so much :-)

    – Matt Penfold

  • Norma-jean Morrison
    Norma-jean Mor...over 5 years ago

    Love this work…….Cheers

  • Thank you so much Norma, I’m really pleased you like it :-)

    – Matt Penfold

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