Old Flame
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I know her.
Alexandra.
A woman who I worked with ten years ago. She knew who I was like I had never left her all those years ago.
Left her.
More like left the work place, but of course she will claim it was both.
Not wanting to be caught staged fright without words, I strike my hand out with greeting. A bold statement that I was not interested in kissing her hello. She seemed unpleasantly humoured by the fact my ways had not changed. Her bitter smirk was almost as strange as the realisation that I somehow never left her own mind.
I felt her pain.
I exercised this brief moment to study what had happen, what she must be have gone through, quite possibly is still going through. I could not wipe off the ridiculously awkward smile I was wearing. She continued to stand there with that smirk, like she had stood in front of a mirror practising for this day.
Lisa Jewell
wow Matt such a powerful piece, you’ve captured the awkwardness of that first meeting after a breakup (or departure). It is so difficult to get into the mind of another person. You’ve managed this wonderfully.
linaji
I am with your ma.. this is a wonderful exchange of how we perceive others we have known and when someone is wearing a bruise ..wow this had me and I wanted more!!
linaji
I was not done. I do believe this is the bane of our existance, trying to figure the mind out of another..but this happens and it is so painful, obliviious to the fact of the matter that we really never know untill the person says somehthing.. even then it is their perception of their own life!! How the heck do we live with one another Matt? Great Writing and as I said I wanted MORE!!
Matthew Mitchell replied
Thanks Linaji. xo
erich biemer
i made the mistake of reading the comments as i was on my way to make my own and am now feeling awkward since linaji appears to be saying lisa is your mom….which is wonderful if true or metaphorical but the not knowing extended from your piece on down in the end makes me appreciate it even more…..
Matthew Mitchell replied
My mother indeed….:)
erich biemer
how lucky for you both!
Zolton
Love this… very well done!!
marieangel
great write so enjoyed thank you….
eoconnor 14 days ago
well done matthew I enjoyed yhis. LIZ