I'll never look at you again
I’ll never look at you like that again
you’re not the same
you have changed so much
the way you touch your face
reminds me of a place we used to go
you may remember it
we used to sit and talk
we used to walk a lot
we had a secret place where shadows crossed your face
you used to brush them off
I didn’t tell you then but they didn’t go
I can see them now they were dancing on your brow
you looked so beautiful you still do now
but different somehow
you have changed so have I
that’s why I ‘ll never look at you like that again
..........
JustPaula
Moving Piece … well done!
Laurie McClave
Nice! You write as well as you draw…....
Deb Gillett
What is it about your work? The intensity nearly has me in tears!
mimi yoon
i admire your work…
peyote
a little sad…
The reality that things change.
xXx
martinz replied
I don’t feel it is sad to change as long as you do it together—that is really what I meant—thankyou for your nice comments it is SOOO appreciated
peyote
well i love change but sometimes its sad to leave things behind that you enjoyed so much once.
Like that first week when your in love :)
xXx
SaRaHKnOwDoG
Ahhh, Martinz. Days and time past, never to be the same again ….... Beautiful peice of writting, it moved me. Oh ! and cheerz there for yr selection of my work as favorites. I have never veiwed those three images togeather ? They fit well : )
x s.Dog