THE JUDGE AND THE JURY
Words are a very powerful instrument. Through writing we are able to enlighten, encourage, and inspire. Sometimes I have an idea that I want to be viewed as a profound piece of literary art. This is one of those pieces.
I considered what it felt like to be viewed and or judged for whatever reason, and I wanted to create a piece of art that stood out and stood alone. I knew that I would need some help because I didn’t want my voice and perception to be the only one.
What you are reading…or have already read…is a collective voice…..broken down into indivuidual segments. Each voice unique and beautiful in it’s own right. TOGETHER THE VOICES ARE AS LOUD AS THUNDER!
THEY ARE THE VOICES OF:
MARKEZZACKUI
RICARDO PEREZ JR
AND
COLORBLIND
THE JUDGE AND THE JURY belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Anger Management, Collaboral Damage, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Current Issues, Deep Within, Everyday Life, First Things, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, LEFT WING VALUES AND POSITIVE GLOBAL AWARENESS, Lifeline, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Midnight Ramblers, Multiracial Beauty, Politics, Race, Sexuality and Culture, Put Out! or Get Out!!!, Shameless Self-Promotion, The beauty of poetry, The Healing Journey, The New Beat Generation, The Red Writing Room, Up & Coming Writers, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!, Who are YOU to Judge?, WMG and Writing: Persuing Happinessall the laughter
and
chitter-chatter
stopped…
at the site of my dreadlocks,
or maybe it was my loose jeans
and big lips
that made them throw me at the mercy of THE JUDGE
knowing that he would convict
because I am too outspoken,
and not afraid to,
express myself,
and be myself,
refusing to be a slave to,
the
ideas
concepts
and perceptions
of the jury
my vision isn’t blurry
so I ordered my food to-go
because I had to,
and was glad to….
satisfied with being and abstraction
paying them no mind,
because this shit always happens
I understand,
that being understood,
is too much like
right,
so I keep God close
and pray for those same people at night,
I have to rid myself of grudges,
for the jurors,
and the judges,
because I opt to live,
for they know not what they do,
still it’s my choice to forgive,
and be the change I am looking for,
rather than squandering time,
trying to even the score,
with useless disputes,
about my roots
the truth
is just that-
THE TRUTH..
I represent the beauty of darkness,
my mental sharpness,
protects me
and let’s me
see through that nonsense
and focus on my destiny,
I have no need to
please you
or carry myself beneath you
.
.
.
your honor
……………………...……………………….MARKEZZACKUI…
Order, Order!
I laugh
in a disorderly case of judgment
Ha,Ha,Ha!
Order,Order !
never evaluating self before
convicting on faulty convictions
Ahh! yes
Order to be ordered by the so called higher authority
The jury of judges speak…
My plea for being one of the illest ricardo perez jr 9-25-09
The sickest
The hardest
Yet intelligent
Overturned !
due to failure of standardized appearance of the following
As if my looks ever had to do with my life
As if these feelings would not arise on a simple twist of my fate
Like that ever effected the mental capacity to absorb
or ability to retain
This chair did not come with a guarantee that I was blocked
or protected from the harshness of a normal life as yourself
My condition did not come with a warranty as if my health breaking
will some how get me a new life
Never did my birth certificate state that in any case that
this child develop a mental or physical condition
it shall shield him from domestic situations
Never did it provide me a card to have both parents there
in an instant
No restrictions were set on love
how much was given to me ,and or how much i could distribute
My condition never blessed me
not to be not attracted towards the opposite sex
nor did it guard me from having my heart broken
MD didn’t stand for more drugs
yet it’s what was to be
addict or tambourine man
a bit of both
No insurance for friends in case of betrayal or thieves
It did not say to follow a specific way of life or customs
No where in the fine print of my DNA’s genetics did it limit the
amount of goals to set for me,
myself !
I speak for myself to not confuse with similar circumstances
So people of the jury
I shit on the verdict !
And hereby declare openly,
your laws of life are not based on facts
rather assumption’s of thought’s of other cases similar
I guess I’m self proclaimed on facts of my journey
Order, Order!
I laugh
in a disorderly case of judgment
Ha,Ha,Ha!
Order,Order !
never evaluating self before
convicting on faulty convictions
Ahh! yes
Order to be ordered by the so called higher authority
The jury of judges speak
I swear to tell the truth
The whole truth
and nothing but the truth
So help me God
But the truth doesn’t matter
Not here
I’m the picture of what you perceive to be trouble
My skin is that of fried chickens
The first thing you pick at
You want to devour my soul
You want to feel superior
And make me feel inferior
Break me down
Tear my dark meat from my bones
Being persecuted
Just for being laced in a body with color
Why do you persecute me
Why am I the one found guilty
Eyes of rejection
Projecting
All in my direction
Like spears
They try to pierce me
My mentality is my only protection
From this frigid reality
I have spoken the truth and thats all I have to say
I rest my case
Give me life
And throw away the key
For thats all I want
Life
your honor
And these are my final words
Like a box of Crayola’s
Though its filled with a variety of colors
Every color is made for the same purpose as the others
To bring together a pretty picture
Why can’t we be a box of Crayola’s
And stay in the lines
Of bringing together a pretty picture
……………………………………………………….............… .colorblind
Cassidy JK (Ra...
I need to come back to this masterpiece but wanted you to know I read it.
MarkezzAckui ... replied
It’s all good…..I too am still reading it because it becomes more powerful with each reading. I appreciate your time and compliment.
ShadowDancer
wow, this is an impressive piece of work.. i sat here for a few minutes thinking what to say, but truly, it’s a magnificent piece and it speaks for itself. absolutely wonderful job. and it is definitely relevant.
MarkezzAckui ... replied
Thank you Shadow Dancer. It’s one that you really need to be in the mood to read and think and read and think :))))
Your compliment is greatly appreciated and I’m sure Ricardo Perez Jr and COLORBLIND feel the same way.
I am truly thankful for what you have said here.
TBall
Like Cass, I have started to read- very intriguing but its bed time in the land of Oz for me- a must read over the weekend
Take Care Trev
MarkezzAckui ... replied
Hey buddy…..no worries….it’s all good…come back when the time is right and let us know what you think.
I am thankful that you at least started it and left a comment saying so. Little things like that say so much about your character.
happyfeet5
Congratulations on your feature. This is awesome. Right now I don’t have the right words to convey what I feel for this. Iris
MarkezzAckui ... replied
that means a lot….I believe Ricardo and Colorblind feel the same way when I say thank you for this strong comment/compliment
linaji
Well.. and it is deep.. you know your naming it all..and the rap ..espically in the beginning.. I was singing it!! lolol Your an amazing artist.. and people can relate.. I relate to the one you just posted
not tosted with them just you.. you da judge and the jury…but really brotha MARKEZZACKUI.. ahhh such a fine name for the King/Prince you are in my heart.. you know that the naming is gaming
but the change is always in no blaming..
teehee.. loving you…xxxxx
MarkezzAckui ...
thank you for this heartfelt comment Lina. This is one writing I will never forget…it was an honor to work with these gentlemen…..in many ways…I feel like we made history….that is how deeply I feel this piece and what it represents.
linaji
I would love to know your process.. such success to you ALL!
Cassidy JK (Ra...
I have read, chewed on this, savoured all of the delicious flavors, seen the gorgeous colors…the BROWNS which are the colors of the earth on which these judges and jurors stand. In art there are palettes of colors yet as artists we each make up that palette. When we join together, we make beauty in all of its forms. If only everyone could see through artists’ eyes!
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Men, it has been an honor to read your words and more of an honor to call you my friends.
Xoxo
MarkezzAckui ... replied
TTTTTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNKKKKKKKKKKKK YYYYYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ushna Sardar
MarkezzAckui ... replied
Thanks Ushna…...from all three of us. It’s an honor to be feaured in your group.
rubyjo
excellent write from you both, i love writing that makes you sit up and pay attention- and this does it well!
MarkezzAckui ... replied
Rubyjo…I (we) want to thank for this comment because that’s exactly what this writing was designed to do….grasp the attention of those who care to read. You are appreciated.
rubyjo
oh- and i realized afterward that there were 3 people that contributed to this write, sorry for my oversight… :)
MarkezzAckui ...
thanks :))))
gretchen .
the strength of this piece exceeds description, powerful writing brother. the way it’s meant :-D!! x o x
MarkezzAckui ... replied
thanks gretchen that means a lot…..these guys are really strong writers and it was an honor and a joy to be able to work with them.
[l1|\|70|\| 7\...
Wow! An Epic piece of defieance and “But the truth doesn’t matter. Not here” You got that so right!
MarkezzAckui ... replied
thanks for your compliment bro….I couldn’t have done it without these two amazing artist and I am glad that you enjoyed reading this.
Shoaib .
tight piece man, ya’ll left my eyes blury
all three of you came with a fury
made it rain like a flurry
this is an epic story
much love
shoaib aka. mr hung like a jury
MarkezzAckui ... replied
hey thanks man….right on. Straight up! Not sure where you stand with collabs…but I have thought of working with you on more than one occasion….I dig the way you put words together and you write with an overwhelming amount of passion.
So let me know, because my pen is always handy.
Mr. hung like a jury…...
cool
ArcadiaTempest
That old saying about judging the book by the cover came to mind when I first began to read this and then I found myself thinking about how we choose to let others see us…like we can have say in this but only if we are with open minded people….And if not we battle against so much more that we cannot swim against that tide so to not drown in the murkiness of dull minds we swim into a different stream that yes still has a strong and unexpected rip here and there …..And then the verdict of guilty was this guilty of not being what we want you to be…??? In depth beyond and above….XXX
rubyjo
Congratulations to all three, you are featured in the Anger management group

you know i love this piece
MarkezzAckui ... replied
THANKS RUBYJO…..WE ALL APPRECIATE THIS FEATURE FROM THE BOTTOM OF OUR HEARTS!!!!!