Now

Tick tock, tick tock, tick tock.
What does the sound mean?
Tick tock, goes the clock.
So drifts on the stream.

Flowers grow before they bloom.
Sun rises every day.
Thoughts dance in a crystal room.
Now ever, come what may.

  • Jim Hall

    Jim Hall

    Enigmatic, yet sweetly written. Fuel for ponderance. Pretty good. JH

  • Marlo11 replied

    Thanks Jim. I hope while you ponder the thoughts come clearly! Cheers. :)

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Mesmerizing..i love this!

  • Marlo11 replied

    Oh my gosh. Thanks Erika15. That means a lot. Cheers. :)

  • skinnyman

    skinnyman

    really nice piece, concise.

  • Marlo11 replied

    Thank you skinnyman. :)

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    Lovely. xx

  • Marlo11 replied

    Thanks o.p.k. I appreciate your comment. :)

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais
  • Marlo11 replied

    Oh wow! I get so excited when I see this! Like a little kid on Christmas morning! Thank you so much. :)

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker

    More excellent work!!! Nicely done and congrats on your feature!!!

  • Marlo11 replied

    Thanks so much Leon. :)

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    This is hauntingly beautiful…. flowers grow before they bloom…. what a wonderful painting of Now-Logic. Thank you.

  • Marlo11 replied

    Thank you for you kind comments Jim. Glad you like it. Cheers. :)

Add your comment

You need to login or signup to add your comment to this work.