Final Resting Place

Mark Moskvitch
Author: Mark Moskvitch
Word Count: 192
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Final Resting Place

Inspired by the excellent work of Sarah Moore and her image Final Resting Place

I often write in an archaic voice as I enjoy the flow of the words. On being amazed by the Mists of Avalon series of images, I decided to write this piece.


Image Copyright: Sarah Moore 2008

Final Resting Place belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and Myths, Legends and Fairytales

Great Arthur sought an audience
With bold Sir Galahad again
For though he thought the Grail secure
His efforts thus were but in vain

“Oh, Galahad my trusted friend
I seek your wisdom pure and true
The Templars sought an evil friend
Azazels’ spawn, pray known to you”

“In ways that are unknown to me
This evil beast did make his way
Within the walls of Camelot
And with the Grail did steal away”

Sir Galahad drew in his breath
“My liege I feel it fair to say
The Templars have their trust misplaced
This dark and evil morbid day”

“If they did seek the Grail once more
I know not why they chose this path
For where the dragon stores his wealth
Few men or beasts may ever pass”

“For now he has it in his hold
He’ll never choose to give it up
The Templars in their hasty choice
Shall no more see their sacred cup”

And sadly nor shall Arthurs eyes
No mortal man may wrest it free
The dragon coils around its prize
And guards it through eternity…

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    saw the pic too and read it! both are awesome! well done!

  • Mark Moskvitch replied

    Ushna,

    Many thanks for your kind comments.

  • Sarah Moore

    Sarah Moore

    This is AWESOME! I love it…please can we have some more?!

  • Mark Moskvitch replied

    Sarah,

    Many thanks…hope you like them…more are on their way…

  • George Petrovsky

    George Petrovsky

    G’day Mark,

    Indeed, a fitting tribute to Sarah’s creativity. And to yours. Every picture tells a story and here you have found the right ones in the most appropriate style.That one of my images has become part of both her work and your words is a great honour. :) george

  • Mark Moskvitch replied

    George,

    Then honour is all mine….your forest image appears as though made for such a treatment….excellent work…

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA

    Mark I’ve just caught up with your wonderful writings. Congratulations – you surely are a gifted person!!! Great to have met you last Saturday in person.

  • Mark Moskvitch

    Mark Moskvitch

    Rosalie,

    Many thanks. Likewise re Saturday. I have found Sarah’s images most inspirational in putting together these written pieces.

  • Dayonda

    Dayonda

    Congratulations on having this work featured. It’s very well done, and even without the pictures that inspire you to write, it brings to mind clear pictures of the action in the story.

  • Mark Moskvitch replied

    Dayonda,

    Many thanks for your kind comments…it was indeed a pleasant surprise to see it featured.

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020

    Very well-written, good choice of words. I enjoyed the voices and the dialogue that went on between them.

  • Mark Moskvitch replied

    Natella,

    Many thanks. I enjoy using active voices where I can as I find it tends to give the piece a momentum of it’s own beyond mine…

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