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Without You.....

The void deep inside my soul, where the sky meets the sea
Cloudless shape of lace envelopes every trace of you
Standing on the precipice of life, nearly touching death without you
Each smell of every season, gives memory to reason

The ocean of life looks scary without you
The storm passes, life becomes worth the wait
Sometimes I snatch a glimpse of you
Your gone again, too late.

Without you nothing seems the same,
The burning sun, refreshing rain
Where is your boat on life’s seas?
I’m waiting safely in harbour
Come back to me.

Even for a moment which will never be enough
a year or an eternity, without your gentle smile
I trace the gloss upon your picture
for just a little while.

Some days I am strong, I feel like I belong
Today I am lost without you.
We had plans I now need to rewrite my story
Just for the glory
Of being without you.
Copyright December 2009 Angel Hamilton

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This poem was a free write inspired by a capture on my artwork Without you a beautiful Picture of peaceful ocean In Queensland Australia
It does bring back memories of loss and bereavement….

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If you decide to buy any of my art or writings I donate 100% to many chosen charities. 2012 will be for the candlelighters children’s cancer based at St James hospital Leeds. The Forget me not trust in memory of our dear friend Una Pearce. Please enjoy and I wish you all you wish yourselves .
Marie Angel .

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Comments

  • BCallahan
    BCallahanover 4 years ago

  • Thank you for this Barbara my friend a picture of my art work to compliment the poem x

    – marieangel

  • Leon A.  Walker
    Leon A. Walkerover 4 years ago

    This is really wonderful work!

  • Thank you for your support leon seasons greetings to you ;))

    – marieangel

  • wildwomenlove
    wildwomenloveover 4 years ago

    this is truly beautiful Angel. I too know grief and in this I feel the ebb and flow of the tides of grief, without which we struggle to survive, as grief is such an overwhelming war of emotions. so many beautiful lines – Standing on the precipice of life, nearly touching death without you, such a powerful line, this gifts me the imagery of a quaking child standing alone on a knife edge, too frightened to move either way, so so powerful. beautiful poem, beautiful image, thank you x

  • Thank you so much for this deep feedback you went into the poem and emotions as I intended…means a lot angelx

    – marieangel

  • S .
    S .over 4 years ago

    ohhh this is so incredible.. yah i feel ya on this piece … “Some days I am strong, I feel like I belong Today I am lost without you.” love those lines
    great work dear this is awesome

  • Thank you so much work your comment and your interest in my work is greatly appreciated seasons greetings to you and your and best wishes for the new year:))

    – marieangel

  • sunnyt
    sunnytover 4 years ago

    Right there with you my tallented friend… HUGS

  • Thank you so kind of you x

    – marieangel

  • lianne
    lianneover 4 years ago

    Oh I can so relate to this piece Angel – especially that last stanza. There are days when the loss just stretches out endlessly before us and in that huge expanse of time, we lose our courage, our strength. Then we do feel lost – adrift without love to anchor us. But then on other days, our strength returns, thank the Good Lord. Beautiful work Angel.

  • Yes Lianne what a difference a day makes in the life of a poet/ress smile;))

    – marieangel

  • Valli
    Valliover 4 years ago

    DITTO x

  • Thank you glad you get it!!xox

    – marieangel

  • CanyonWind
    CanyonWindover 4 years ago

    Superb emotional write.
    Big hugs.
    POP’s

  • aw thanks Pops x

    – marieangel

  • canonman99
    canonman99over 4 years ago

    congrats on the feature, expressive,dramatic,heartfelt, reflective,emotional..

  • Thank you for dropping by and for the lovely comment;))

    – marieangel

  • and for the fave;__))

    – marieangel

  • linmarie
    linmarieover 4 years ago

    Dear Angel this year is showing me new bonds, this write is so beautiful and reminiscent of my writes of love gone, a painting paints a thousand words, please go to my CAMEO,, I THINK WE share the same earth,, love to you my friend, this goes to my favs,, linmarie
    “cameo”
    please the write also,, we are one in the same, I THINK!!

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