Last Prayer
I keep asking God when the tears will stop coming. I’ve been crying for 3 years now. I just want you to say sorry. How I think that will make things better is beyond me. I do wish we were still friends and I don’t understand why you ignore me or say rude things to me. I just want you to say sorry. Why aren’t you sorry? Why?
Last night I didn’t sleep. My mind was racing. I felt sad because I missed my dad, Ron, and I thought about my sister Sara too. As I was going through these emotions I thought of you and how sad and empty you might feel too. And as if it were the last prayer God might ever answer for me… I prayed for you. I believe the best for you.
Comments
You are right I can here it, the song would begreat… Nicely concieved writting….
Thank you so much! I can feel it being a great song, however I just can’t seem to find the right path to do so. Do you have any ideas? ….Thank you for your comment; I was encouraged.
This is of the right heart and mind. Aside from how we feel and what we are going through, God wants us to set ourselves aside and pray for others. This writing is a great testament to unselfishness. Through such unselfishness God will heal you. Mouring is ok. Letting it consume you is not. Lay it at the feet of our Father. He will take your burdens upon Him.
I can feel the song too. I think you should make “i believe the best for you” the beginning of the chorus. =)
Oh I like that idea! Thank you so much! What a great idea…I’ll have to start revamping it. Yay!!!!!!