Unwanted Angel

Sounds like many mothers out there, I think you hit it right on key. Maybe they will read and understand what drinking is doing to them. Really brings the point across and to the point, nice job.

to close to home, you have described those feelings well

sad and unfortunate truth sometimes!..well done!

nice job! like it!

thanks guys & gals! every time in the news somethin’ bad is happenin to an innocent !
and its kept quiet and doesnt get dealt to until they’ve grown up. way too late then, too much damage done!

very well written

A harsh visual, sad but true for far too many innocent ones but maybe someone will read your words see themselves in them and make a change.

brought me to tears… beautiful words.

My eyes kept moving & the message hit home. Well done!

In my nieces primary school in NZ they are teaching kids about inappropriate behaviour and what to do if it happens. Awareness isnt a lot to ask. Thanks for looking people!

this brought a tear to my eye

Boy, can I relate.. You truly know how to bring those feelings to life. It is then, that the healing can begin. Thank you.. such beautiful work!

i just smiled a frown

wow. so sad. i hate to think it’s ever true~*

Wow, that was a very heart touching poem. I really liked it, keep up the good work.

I love your work your amazing.

A reality for way too many Americans.
None the less, count your blessings.
I’m a veteran. I’ve been, overseas.

Wow! this is powerful…. well written. Raw truth of so many children… so sad too… Susie :)

Harsh reality…very well written.

thanks people for your comments, the child i was referring to is also the same child “JenniferB” refers to in “Silent tears”

real

WOW, the reality of this is so sad….You described it well

ah… got you, I’m a bit slow on the uptake. ;-) This is a beautiful interpretation of an ugly situation. I used to teach sexually abused kids… experience goes a long way towards qualifying a person to help out others…

it takes a whole lotta strength to deal with it & even more to teach innocents who have been brought up to think that is normal life. that can be a melting heart moment for anyone. i knew you had a soft centre!

i knew you had a soft centre!

Ssh! Don’t blow my cover! Horrible fucking people might start liking me. ;-)

sad

very touching words….it draws a quiet silence in my heart. Sad, and true. Thankyou for sharing :)

beautiful angst filled piece.. well done~

Powerful and sad..

My life in 53 words. That’s sad, but it makes for some powerful poetry. Good job!

Touching thedeepest emotion in the hearts of many including me – thank you

This one hits hard..many are without….you painted this very well…a fave.

That is amazing, very emotional and so true..!