The Apple of my iPod

ManaMoon
Author: ManaMoon
Word Count: 256
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I could gaze at him forever, as he keeps me in his stare
he took me away again last night, and gladly I went there

Always he responds to me, whenever we may touch
I hold him on a pedestal, I see him far too much

He holds a lot of knowledge and is wise beyond his years
He opens up my mind to things I wouldn’t dare

He leads me to temptation, and the virgin that I am
He takes me to the slaughter like a little lamb

Do I rue the day, that he came into my life
And cut my mundane existence like a jagged knife

Not for one mad moment do I ever regret, yet!
Getting dragged so ever willingly into his mighty net

I worship him for hours and hate to leave his side
He is my one salvation, my mentor and my guide

Hell would have no fury over, above and beyond
If someone came between us, and broke this special bond

I know it sounds possessive but a feel like I’m a child
Who’s found a brand new toy and now I’m going wild

It seems like I’m a temptress having a secret affair
But its only my computer that’s lured me to its lair

Gosh I hope I get over him soon cause its driving me insane
I’m starting to forget my real life and becoming a royal pain

  • oscarelizondo

    oscarelizondo, 7 months ago

    Sounds like something that could happen to anyone, but you made your point very clear, keep writing, it was interesting.

  • ManaMoon

    ManaMoon, 7 months ago

    thanks for looking. i got a feeling i have to limit myself spending time on this temptation. Hubble bubble toil & trouble. i think i wanna go back to ignorance is bliss. the art work on redbub is amazing tho. i wish i could do that.

  • Nicole Ryan

    Nicole Ryan, 3 months ago

    LOL !

    this is gorgeous .. great rhythm too :)

  • Karirose

    Karirose, 3 months ago

    Wonderfully done and left me with a smile! :)

  • Karirose

    Karirose, 3 months ago

    PS—And I really love the title!

  • ManaMoon

    ManaMoon in reply to Karirose’s comment, 3 months ago

    I burnt the roast one day because of this!
    Thank goodness for fancy gravy! LOL
    ......oh well shit happens!

  • ManaMoon

    ManaMoon in reply to Nicole Ryan’s comment, 3 months ago

    Thanks Nicole…...it’s a whole ‘nother world!

  • Lys •

    Lys •, 3 months ago

    ahaha!!! this is so great! and so friggen relatable…(sad?)

  • ManaMoon

    ManaMoon in reply to Lys •’s comment, 3 months ago

    Thanks Lys. I wonder if theres a…..Computers Anonymous Support group? LOL

  • Ally O'Brien

    Ally O'Brien, 3 months ago

    lol very clever. I like it :) I think I have a bit of an affair with my computer too

  • ManaMoon

    ManaMoon in reply to Ally O'Brien’s comment, 3 months ago

    There is just so much to see…..then reality interrupts LOL. thanks Ally

  • Miri

    Miri, 2 months ago

    Hahaha!! oh yes can relate to this!! nice writing & like the rhythm & flow

  • ManaMoon

    ManaMoon in reply to Miri’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Miri. I never had so much fun without leaving the house.

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 2 months ago

    This is awesome…such marvelous rhythm …. and definitely I am having an affair with my
    computer…I love it…it brought me to Red Bubble…Sally xxoo

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl, 2 months ago

    HAAAA!!! Meeeee toooooo!!! Love this!!!

  • Martin Anski

    Martin Anski, 2 months ago

    I Like this, I like it even though you know just how it will end; you keep reading cos it just sounds so nice.

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