Loves Potion

ManaMoon
Author: ManaMoon
Word Count: 180
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The way you Flex your Muscles
And the Strength in your Arms
The Softness of your Hold
And the Power of your Charms

They say Men should be Manly
And not show a Softer Side
But the more Gentle a Man is
The Stronger is his Pride

Knowing that those powerful hands
Can seek a Sensitive Spot
or Catch you when your Falling
makes a Man More So than not

A Loving word, a Tender Look
Concern for your Well Being
A Helping Hand, a Silent Guard
Your Knowing and Agreeing

All Living things on this Earth
Have their Yin and Yan
Soft does not belong to Woman
And Hard not just to man

A Piece of each is Given
To enable Balance and Peace
Give and Take, Cry and Laugh
Will help your Love Increase

The Essence of your Worth
Can’t be measured on a Chart
It’s what you Do and Say
And the Content of your Heart

The Perfect Partner Potion
Exists in Clouds of Mirth
We all have imperfections
I prefer more Down to Earth

  • Jane Keats

    Jane Keats

    Beautifully put Mana Moon, I love this.

  • ManaMoon replied

    Thanks Jane…...that’s the side men show less in public …...and it’s a shame!

  • Sharon Perrett

    Sharon Perrett

    Wow, so beautifully written…....and true. Instant favourite , love it

  • ManaMoon replied

    Thanks Sharon…...it’s the little things that mean a lot!

  • Jane Keats

    Jane Keats

    True, luckily I got one from Christchurch who doesn’t give a shit what anyone thinks, lol. He’s sees it as he’s a person, just like any other person. No need to prove he’s a ‘man’, everyone can see that! Funnily enough, other men often look to him for leadership because of it.

  • ManaMoon replied

    Your man is comfortable within himself and doesn’t have to prove it because he knows it .....that’s the Balance we all need

  • Jane Keats

    Jane Keats

    Couldn’t agree more, we are what we are, be proud, but open to ideas, and there you have it, balance :o)

  • Jane Keats

    Jane Keats

    PS love Mary J Blige and that song!

  • oscarelizondo

    oscarelizondo

    More than just romantic, very touching, very much with the feeling of passion. What a beautiful piece to discribe your man. This is so refine that it can hold for many reasons. You have captured a master piece . Whola baby ! LOL

  • ManaMoon replied

    Thank you oscar my friend ~(;>)

  • DiscoverMe

    DiscoverMe

    I’ve been passed over by every woman for supposedly being too perfect a guy for them or too good of a friend, but would make a terrible boyfriend (no joke; their own words) in their eyes because of these certain qualities I have.
    I’m glad to know there’s hope for me yet (at least at having a chance with mature women as opposed to girls wanting more flings & to play more games with more adventure...or just wanting to have someone to train).

    I especially love the Yin & Yan reference made.

    Russ

  • ManaMoon replied

    Russ….You are just too good to be true!!!!....Maybe thats the problem….Your Yin isn’t Yanged enough!!!! LOL

  • Karirose

    Karirose

    This description of a man is so beautifully written and speaks to the heart of the matter. So strong is the physical, so tender the heart. I have a man in my life that fits this description perfectly. Thank you for expressing it so very nicely. :)

  • ManaMoon replied

    Thanks Karirose…..it makes lifes ups and downs a lot smoother and more relaxed

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020

    Nicely put, important message. I love the last two lines.

  • ManaMoon replied

    Thanks Natella…..feet firmly placed on the ground….with head peeking through the clouds LOL!!

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