Yes, take back the curtain, what we all try and do. You’ve captured this wonderfully. You take remarkable photographs, at once both eerie and engaging. Breathless glimpses.
This is so wonderful, Malen. I favorited it a few days ago, but wanted to come back and really take another look. You’ve captured the child’s inquisitiveness so perfectly and the muted colors inside juxtaposed with the bright, colorful, inviting light outside adds to the story. Really great – I wish I’d made this piece of art!
The subject matter is very interesting, conjuring many guesses as to just what the child is thinking and what is beyond the window in the garden and you have made a great photograph of that.
HOWEVER!
I feel that as it is now there is just too much wasted space in the frame. You have to ask yourself just what is the subject here and just how well do you want to present it. To my mind and eye this fine photograph needs a drastic and dramatic crop that will give much more impact to the child and curtain and justify why the child’s legs have been cut out of the image by your framing in camera. I strongly suggest cropping to bring the top edge of frame down to just above the clouds and our right edge of frame in far enough to leave a little space beside the first discernible flower behind the curtain. I also strongly suggest cropping to bring the bottom edge of frame up to eliminate the skirtingboard as this will further contain the very best of this scene. All this could probably be well contained as an 8×10 standard size.
Your exposure under the great lighting is very well done and your focus has rendered a nice crisp, clear image of the child and curtain showing lovely detail. The colours are refreshingly natural and the contrasts most pleasing. Lovely work!
Definitely not your-every-day child portraiture. I love your work, had a look through it all. I read the comments including Dennis Gray’s suggestion about this one and it’s so good of him to write a full feedback like that. I want to say that for me, cropping in further in the way Dennis suggests would take away from the whole mood, to my reading. The crumpled curtain at the bottom RHS and the skirting board is perfect and beautifully lit in terms of the rest of the image. I think you need the height in the sky to convey the depth and expanse of the child’s’ view’. I even like the fact that the legs are chopped off. To have the child framed in the middle would destroy the feeling of a ‘spontaneous’ shot of child unaware. Beautifully rendered image.
vonne, 8 months ago
Your SO creative!!!
SylviaHardy, 8 months ago
This is so lovely, brilliant image!
Victor(Vic) Be..., 8 months ago
beautiful idea
love the colours !
Mariska, 8 months ago
more and more amazed me Malen…just beautiful..
TrEaSuReDiMaGeS, 8 months ago
Absolutely Gorgeous Malen!! A beautiful addition to our group :-)
cheerishables, 8 months ago
Really beautiful … Almost looks like a painting behind the window. Very creative and very dreamy!
Basia McAuley, 8 months ago
You are so amazingly creative, Love this piece!
Mien, 8 months ago
so very nice, love it
ginnymac, 8 months ago
i think this is just so wonderful ,very interesting, and beautifully composed.
Madison Ellis, 8 months ago
LOVE IT!!!
Nicole Goggins, 8 months ago
I just LOVE all of your work – it’s so inspiring!
Robert Knapman, 8 months ago
Just stunning – wonderful romantic and eternal image .)
birdinsun, 8 months ago
Fabulous image.
Paul Tupman, 8 months ago
Fabulous work.. the colour in this is magical and I love the view through the curtain.. you always bring such great imagination to your work…
Antanas, 8 months ago
Great work!
Jacq Wilson, 8 months ago
So clever!!
Douzy, 8 months ago
Amazing work again, love the way you mix your layers.
Margot Kiesskalt, 8 months ago
Very clever shot – well done!
shanghaiwu, 8 months ago
fabulous
Rusty Woodward..., 8 months ago
I can see a fairy…........
Headcrime, 8 months ago
Great work!
Lauren Zorn, 8 months ago
Absolutely enchanting.
Lindsay Blamey, 8 months ago
incredible shot… well done… Love it!
minnielee, 8 months ago
I absolutely love your style! I just got back from browsing your gallery. Beautiful work!!
Naomi Mawson, 8 months ago
Your work makes me smile :)
Paul Gana, 8 months ago
truly a work of art
MarkoBeslac, 8 months ago
Great work!
Barbara Sparhawk, 7 months ago
Yes, take back the curtain, what we all try and do. You’ve captured this wonderfully.
You take remarkable photographs, at once both eerie and engaging. Breathless glimpses.
joolz, 7 months ago
This is so gorgeous Malen. I love all your work of children.
Kerry McFarland, 7 months ago
Your work is magical, ethereal, and stunning.
midzing, 6 months ago
beautiful,,, well done
orourke, 6 months ago
great light and tones
AngelPhotozzz, 6 months ago
Wow beautiful work!!!!!
cherylc1, 6 months ago
precious
Charles Winslow, 6 months ago
perfection as always!
meanderthal, 6 months ago
this is superb…. !!!
Redlac, 6 months ago
i love this piece. so sweet and beautiful.
Heather Hartkamp, 6 months ago
Just sublime!!!
Geri Bragg, 6 months ago
great photo.
Erin Lyall, 6 months ago
Gorgeous photo.
jerry alcantara, 6 months ago
amazing great texture,my fav!
jerry alcantara, 6 months ago
amazing great texture,my fav!
mieclarke, 6 months ago
great capture!
Sandy Clifton, 6 months ago
this is awesome!
Al Bourassa, 6 months ago
Wonderful work!!
Lisa Putman, 6 months ago
Wow! I love this!!!
LozKat, 6 months ago
whoa! stunning!
Birgitta, 6 months ago
That’s fantastic..!
Natalie Perkins, 6 months ago
The shadows are brilliant, I feel like I could come past and tug on the curtain!
Cherie Dirksen, 6 months ago
This is a stunning picture…well done!
girlinthestars, 6 months ago
i love this.
Tanya B. Schro..., 6 months ago
This is so wonderful, Malen. I favorited it a few days ago, but wanted to come back and really take another look. You’ve captured the child’s inquisitiveness so perfectly and the muted colors inside juxtaposed with the bright, colorful, inviting light outside adds to the story. Really great – I wish I’d made this piece of art!
NervousNellie, 6 months ago
Wonderful shot – your work is stunning.
Kuntal Daftary, 6 months ago
really well captured mood – perfect
randi1972, 6 months ago
Stunning! Amazing!
Paul Vanzella
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6 months ago
What an amazing visual – colour tone and style just work so well…. Great piece of work!
Thomas Dodd, 6 months ago
Beautifully composed and masterfully executed…
Kelly Boyle, 6 months ago
this is beautiful
Jing3011, 6 months ago
Wonderful inviting image
William Grow, 6 months ago
wow, that is an amazing peice of art. Truly captivating. I can only imagine what’s going through her mind.
palegirl, 6 months ago
That is sooo very clever, the colours are simply delighfull !
ltruskett, 6 months ago
Visual treat. Such a clever composition and glorious colour.
Troy Simon, 6 months ago
Nice Photo !
Jodie Carruthers, 6 months ago
Brilliant shot!
LOVE IT!!
velveteagle, 6 months ago
You remember… Beautiful..
Ramona Farrelly, 6 months ago
Aw this is a beautiful image. Well captured.
jellybeannnn, 6 months ago
wow, this is a really beautiful picture.
i love it.
TaintedTiffyy, 6 months ago
I love the editing! Amazing.
KCphoto, 6 months ago
Fantastic :)K
KBSImages, 6 months ago
Marvelous!!!!!! Kim
Dennis Gay IPA, 6 months ago
G’day Maren,
This is a cracker of a shot!
The subject matter is very interesting, conjuring many guesses as to just what the child is thinking and what is beyond the window in the garden and you have made a great photograph of that.
HOWEVER!
I feel that as it is now there is just too much wasted space in the frame. You have to ask yourself just what is the subject here and just how well do you want to present it. To my mind and eye this fine photograph needs a drastic and dramatic crop that will give much more impact to the child and curtain and justify why the child’s legs have been cut out of the image by your framing in camera. I strongly suggest cropping to bring the top edge of frame down to just above the clouds and our right edge of frame in far enough to leave a little space beside the first discernible flower behind the curtain.
I also strongly suggest cropping to bring the bottom edge of frame up to eliminate the skirtingboard as this will further contain the very best of this scene.
All this could probably be well contained as an 8×10 standard size.
Your exposure under the great lighting is very well done and your focus has rendered a nice crisp, clear image of the child and curtain showing lovely detail.
The colours are refreshingly natural and the contrasts most pleasing.
Lovely work!
GB
Dennis
Perspective, 6 months ago
HOW COOL!!!
Malen, 6 months ago
Dennis
Thank you so much for your thorough comments on the picture, I’ll give it a try once I’m back home to see how it would look with your suggested crop…
All the best
ninaav, 6 months ago
I like this, it has something so sweet. :)
Rajdev Dhiman, 6 months ago
Impressive, great work
Indah Susanti, 6 months ago
lovely and sweet..
sadmachine, 6 months ago
Awesome photo!
Juliette Steen, 6 months ago
This is really lovely, great work
joolz, 6 months ago
I want to look out the window too!
Nikki Trexel, 5 months ago
incredible!! i’m SO glad i found your work!! :)
carol brandt, 3 months ago
Definitely not your-every-day child portraiture. I love your work, had a look through it all.
I read the comments including Dennis Gray’s suggestion about this one and it’s so good of him to write a full feedback like that. I want to say that for me, cropping in further in the way Dennis suggests would take away from the whole mood, to my reading. The crumpled curtain at the bottom RHS and the skirting board is perfect and beautifully lit in terms of the rest of the image. I think you need the height in the sky to convey the depth and expanse of the child’s’ view’. I even like the fact that the legs are chopped off. To have the child framed in the middle would destroy the feeling of a ‘spontaneous’ shot of child unaware. Beautifully rendered image.
bchrisdesigns, 2 months ago
nice symbolism here.
JuliaWright, 16 days ago
So cute and brilliant!!!