Cool Rain

Cool rain wets the sky and ground, calling.

It silenced the boiling world. Time becomes slow.

My mind wants to enjoy the rain’s intriguing display and peace.

  • juice

    juice

    really honest writing…flowing…like the raindrops that bring peace…thank you for sharing your words of wisdom

  • ladyb

    ladyb

    Beautiful.

  • blamo

    blamo

    I feel like that also some days …...............enjoyable to read Zhao

  • Silvia Manuela

    Silvia Manuela

    You can feel the sense of “slowing down the world” in this piece of writing, Zhao.

  • Martin Derksema

    Martin Derksema

    Great poem, Zhao. Beautiful state of mind.

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    Mariaan Krog A...

    Wonderful Zhao!!

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice Zhao, thanks

  • stevengeer

    stevengeer

    Very nice!

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice piece Zhao. Peaceful….......I wish it would rain here

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