Alone
Alone belongs to the following groups:
Complex Simplicity of Art, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Featured Features - For Featured Art, Photography, T-Shirts, Writing, First Things, Love Bullets and Shameless Self-PromotionYour breathing warms the nape of my neck,
As I feel your body stir against me.
Trembling, my eyes open, moist with tears.
I reach, but only your warmth remains.
copyright 2008
FEATURED IN: Love Bullets
veritasunsaid
Very nice piece; well written!
alex
Judith Hayes replied
Thanks so much Alex. Very hard for me to write SHORT pieces :) This was my shortest.
Philosophy Lee
Congratulations Judith!
“Alone” has been featured in
Love Bullets…
Good job.
:)
Judith Hayes replied
Thanks so much for this honor! Much appreciated!
KEITH R. WILL...
very nice
Judith Hayes replied
Thank you Keith!
warmsoul
This is so beautiful.
Judith Hayes replied
Thank you so much warmsoul!
gemini63
This is beautifully written :))
Judith Hayes
Your comment is much appreciated gemini