Circles Within Circles

tears dripping onto my tongue
like bitter ink onto pristine paper

writing songs of indigo
foamy waves crashing splashing

painting butterfly wings
swish-swish into the azure sky

to pull me back
from the dark

       flutterby wishes

to smell the sweet air
scented with memories and dreams

       lead weights

their surreal quality

       denying
       irredeemable
       neverwhere

dragging
pulling
squeezing

       rewind

tears

dripping

onto

my tongue…


© Sybille Sterk
Do not copy or publish this poem in any way shape or form without my written permission.

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The first two lines have been going round my head….

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I am a very creative person and it’s my way of dealing with the world, inside and out. I am only happy when I am making things or painting or writing. There are just not enough hours in the day…. I am into poetry and photo manipulation at the moment and also dabbling in photography. :-)

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Comments

  • eoconnor
    eoconnorabout 3 years ago

    great imagry and write !Liz

  • Thank you so much Liz. :-)

    – Sybille Sterk

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBooabout 3 years ago

    wonderful write

  • Thank you so much Boo. :-)

    – Sybille Sterk

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellabout 3 years ago

    sublime imagery and colour,
    a senses inking my dear Sybille xxx

  • Thank you Lisa. This was a bit of an experiment with a minimal approach. Not quite a haiku, but I was trying to play with triggers…. Hope this makes sense. xoxoxox

    – Sybille Sterk

  • Edibl3leper
    Edibl3leperabout 3 years ago

    Different from what I have seen of you as of yet, I like it’s fresh appeal, and must come back tomorrow and read it once more at least. (-: Mandi

  • Thank you so much Mandi. I am always playing and experimenting. This one was a play with a minimal approach trying to use just ‘triggers’ to create images. Hope that makes sense. LOL xo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • Valerie Anne Kelly
    Valerie Anne K...about 3 years ago

    Magical sweetheART love it – a fabulous fave – UR a true Flutterby ;} happy hippy hugglez

  • Thank you so much Val. :-) xo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosabout 3 years ago

    Sybille….not difficult to re-sense the wonderful metaphors that are so true, so lively, so re-membered by myself. There is a sense of freedom from the clutch that the tears do in our throats..the swish…swish. …of the painting, the wonderful movement of the soul, transcending the grip of tears..I love so much your poem…and you did well, getting the two first verses ending, as in an eternal looping movement to where you started it. I love it.
    I have NIRVANA writing for a while ( do not have time for everything and have to close it for a while, but it would be great to have in there….wonderful) I will try to catch you up for the invite later.And keep this thread in my dashboard)
    Rosa

  • Thank you so much Rosa. :-)

    – Sybille Sterk

  • Tammera
    Tammeraabout 3 years ago

  • Thank you! Much, much appreciated. :-) xo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • Tammera
    Tammeraabout 3 years ago

    PLEASE JOIN ME IN CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL THE FEATURED ARTISTS
    IN HEART AND SOUL…;-D
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  • :-) Just hopping there… xo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • highbeam
    highbeamabout 3 years ago

    I do like this one Sybille, and it is different from your other works… it stands out. You gift this writing with a very specialness only you could have gifted it with, the words from your heart and soul pour forth. You gave so ‘freely’ of your being here, and this one is quite special indeed. Great writing Sybille!

    You have been Featured in “Art and ink so free.”
    Please invite another to check us out… and just click the banner to have a peek!

  • Thank you so much Russel. Your words mean so much! :-) Greatly appreciate the feature. :-)

    – Sybille Sterk

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindabout 3 years ago

    beautiful writing my sweet. feeling those tears dripping onto my own tongue. congrats on your well deserved features. you rock. XOXOXOXOXOXOXX ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

  • Thank you so much Shar. :-) About to start work on a picture to go with it. :-) xoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxxo ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

    – Sybille Sterk

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