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Mind Castles

We build roads
To Might-have-been
Wish-it-was-true
Should-have-been
And other miraculous,
Magic, out of this world,
Faraway places

Running down the rabbit hole
Going through the wardrobe
Finding that magic door
We enjoy ourselves
We live the life
We always yearned for
And smile in technicolour

Pink fluffy daydreams
Fly on silvery moon beams
To once-in-a-life-time
And happy-ever-after
With sing-songing birds
Helping with the chores
In this world of our own making

Born of a hope for better
We become the creators
Of our own destiny
Where we are the ones
Taking charge
Totally in control
Right here, right now.

Dream castles
Built on sand
Made from bubbles
And butterfly wings

Save me from the same old grey
Colour me with a splash of rainbow
And a sprinkling of fairy dust

Dream castles
Built on sand
Made from bubbles
And butterfly wings

Held together
By the wish for some magic
In a black and white life.

© Sybille Sterk

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This was a really difficult poem to write and get right. It’s easy to be smug about other people’s escapism, but I believe it’s an essential survival tool for most of us, be it watching a soppy film, reading a thriller (and imagining yourself as the dashing hero) or sitting on a bench during your lunch break and day dreaming. Let’s face it, most of our lives aren’t the kind you find in films, often there isn’t a happy ending and a deus ex machina is a rare occurence.

So this is for all the daydreams that made our lives a little brighter and a little happier.


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I am a very creative person and it’s my way of dealing with the world, inside and out. I am only happy when I am making things or painting or writing. There are just not enough hours in the day…. I am into poetry and photo manipulation at the moment and also dabbling in photography. :-)

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Comments

  • Mia Rose
    Mia Roseabout 4 years ago

    Sybille, I love this write more than I can say… you are so absolutely spot on… yes! xo

  • Thank you so much Mia. :-) I am glad I got it right! Took some doing… xo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • lianne
    lianneabout 4 years ago

    And what could possibly be wrong with a daydream like this, my friend?? True, one can’t live in a world of bubbles and butterflies for very long but as you have so brilliantly concluded in words that just might haunt me unless I make them my mantra – our too ordinary, sometimes painful, days can be “held together by the wish for some magic in a black and white life.” I love this, Syb. xox

  • Thank you so much Lianne. :-) I am so pleased you enjoyed this. There’s something magic about daydreams and how they add a little fairy dust to our ordinary lives. :-) xoxo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • eoconnor
    eoconnorabout 4 years ago

    wonderful writting in this I love the en ding !!LIZ

  • Thank you so much Liz. The ending actually changed 3 times before it’s current incarnation. LOL xo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarabout 4 years ago

    Pure Magic!!!!! xoxoxoxo

  • Thank you so much Sally. :-) I am so glad I managed to sprinkle a little fairy dust… xoxo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • Purplecactus
    Purplecactusabout 4 years ago

    Fantastic!! There is nothing better, in my book than drifting off to other worlds and you have captured that freedom and magic so vibrantly and beautifully here. I love it!

  • Thank you so much. :-)

    – Sybille Sterk

  • WolfSoul
    WolfSoulabout 4 years ago

    The time you took to perfect this, was time well spent Magpie. A great read and and amazing write, great talent and it goes well with the art ;

  • Thank you so much. :-) You made my day!

    – Sybille Sterk

  • mario farinato
    mario farinatoabout 4 years ago

    I love it

  • Thank you so much Mario. :-)

    – Sybille Sterk

  • S .
    S .about 4 years ago

    ur writing is always such magic… i think its part of our human nature to have these ideas of escapism… our imaginations it seems are tools for survival, and a place where we find hope
    great work of art sybille

  • Thank you so much Shoaib. I agree it’s a survival mechanism to dream yourself to a ‘nice place’ when things get tough, to allow you to restore your energy and hope. xo

    – Sybille Sterk

  • AnniG
    AnniGabout 4 years ago

    and what an exquisite poem you’ve churned out…

    “Dream castles
    Built on sand
    Made from bubbles
    And butterfly wings”

    Thanks for sharing this…I really love this write – it was well worth the challenge!
    xx

  • Thank you so much Anni. :-) Glad you think so. LOL

    – Sybille Sterk

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBooabout 4 years ago

    amazing write…great work!

  • Thank you so very much. :-) xo

    – Sybille Sterk

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