beauties face

madvlad
Author: madvlad
Word Count: 86
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beauties face

beauties face, is hard to find
when, hidden behind, expections
chase
we look so hard, for some trace
some,clue ,of it,s being there
just out side our, touching hand,
so as to hold, it,s.light ,warming face
against our fearing, heart,
like some, gentle dove
who, in it s holding, would
fly away,scared by our
needing, grace
of loving , beauty,and all
it,s promised, pace
of forever,s resting place,
in our heart ,and, soul
in our ,eternal fold
beauties face

  • Rhinovangogh

    Rhinovangogh about 1 month ago

    Grace…

  • madvlad replied about 1 month ago

    we all seek our own consept of our very very own beauty,be it an idea,form, or mist thank you sir rhinovangogh

  • Rusty Woodward Gladdish

    Rusty Woodward... about 1 month ago

    This is a wonderfully emotional and insightful poem Vlad. Yes, we all have our own ideal of beauty when looking for a partner but really it’s what inside that person that counts.. As you know better than I do, if there’s beauty inside it will shine on the face outside. Anyway, great physical beauty is fleeting and doesn’t last. (ask any Hollywood movie star!!) After all when the beauty of youth is gone. What’s left? Only the core of our very being. But we need beauty in our lives…...... Lovely poem!!!

  • madvlad replied about 1 month ago

    beauty, only starts as an out side job,in the end,it falls or stands on truth of heart and intent,love seeing you my friend, thank you for your=wise= coment always hugz

  • William  Vanden Berg

    William Vande... about 1 month ago

    Nice Walt, Very wise poem

  • madvlad replied about 1 month ago

    thank william,none are so blind, as them who, willl, not see,anything, other, then thier own face in a mirror of ego, for they will never see love or beauties, face,

  • William  Vanden Berg

    William Vande... about 1 month ago

    I agree completely. Sometimes, unfortunitly, our own selfishness gets in the way of truly loving.
    I’m looking in the mirror while I’m writing this…oops. JK

  • madvlad

    madvlad about 1 month ago

    momentary laps of looking are ok,as long as your not there all day bill,its ok to love your,self as long as your not in love with your self,cus that leaves no room for others ,to

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB about 1 month ago

    Another soft, beautiful poem, soft like a lullaby to hopefully ease me to sleep! ;-) xox

  • madvlad replied about 1 month ago

    good night sweet dreamer,your arty day is done,now for dreams and fun-rest=rest=,even saints rest, night jenny,hugz, i,d sing you a lull a bye,but,your too far afield,so i,ll whiper,get your ass in bed dumbo hahaha xoxo

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB about 1 month ago

    but i haven’t slept all night and the sun is out, sky is blue and birds are tweeting!!!! I’m gonna tunnel under the blankets soon and snooze. :-)) xox

  • madvlad

    madvlad about 1 month ago

    look into my eyes jen, you are getting tired, you are getting tired you are getting tired,ok now pass out like a good artist you are,pull the shades,quietize the room,white noise only sleep sleep sleep,snorrrrzzzz

  • Nancy M. Garrett

    Nancy M. Garrett about 1 month ago

    So very beautiful…...It swept me out of my rat race reality for a few minutes and took me to a better place. Thank you madvlad for this wonderful work!

  • madvlad replied about 1 month ago

    nancy,if i can make one person, feel better,or even distracted from daily, stresses, then i guess,my own battles,are eased,a millisecond, thank you for letting me know,this moved you, it moved me as i was writing it, or/did it write it self/?hugz

  • Anthea  Slade

    Anthea Slade about 1 month ago

    Walt this is a tender, wise and beautiful poem. A lovely read on my Saturday morning.

  • sarahhoffman

    sarahhoffman about 1 month ago

    beautiful words…beautiful man…:)

  • madvlad replied about 1 month ago

    hello sweet sarah,lord?i pray i am half decent,some times,i feel angry at this dam world of ours,so i am flesh n blood,and get impatient with, buffonery-in high and low places,but i know, i can,t pick up the first stone,or it would fall back on my face,thank you sarah,hugz in dee ann,s child

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