Over My Dead Body

lunarstorm12
Author: lunarstorm12
Word Count: 73
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Over My Dead Body

I’m depressed again as you can see…

I CAN’T FALL APART
FOR I AM ALREADY IN PIECES
LIFE IS A WINTER
AND I AM FREEZING TO DEATH
THE COLD WIND WHISPERS MY NAME
THE SUN IS NOT FOR ME
CAN ANYONE TELL ME
WHAT I HAVE?
CAN ANYONE TELL ME WHY…
WHY MY SPIRIT IS DEAD
YET MY BODY STILL LIVES?
OH HOW I YEARN FOR RAIN
A STORM THAT WILL FORETELL OBLIVION
A DOWNPOUR
OVER MY DEAD BODY

  • WOLF

    WOLF

    great work

    wolf

  • Julie George

    Julie George

    Strong words and thought. Great.

  • AMHERN0525

    AMHERN0525

    touching poem…i hope your not depressed anymore..things will look up.

  • lunarstorm12 replied

    Thanks AMHERN0525. I appreciate all your comments and kind words.

  • Arnold Isbister

    Arnold Isbister

    this is pretty damn strong, hope you are ok?
    this obviously is from the heart, very well written and fluid like a song.

  • lunarstorm12 replied

    Thanks Arnold. It’s going to be a song actually. Almost almost all of my writings on here are meant to be lyrics to songs.

  • Arnold Isbister

    Arnold Isbister

    Man, these are gonna be some great songs ! Reminds me of Simon or Dylan when they started. That poetry in song seems to be lost now. Wish you…..No no, ” hope you break a leg” as they say in the Arts.

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