Stretch marks on my breasts
From my son who suckled there
Brown spots on my body
From the sun on skin too fair
Cellulite on hips
From the pleasures on my plate
Dark circles under eyes
Not from staying up too late
Sagging pubic mound
That once stood pert and proud
Lines around my lips
That I curse, (cause I’m allowed)
A waist no longer tiny
A bum no longer small
A neck no longer taut
But I don’t resent it all
My body gave me Danial
Gave me pleasure for no fee
It asked of me no questions
And was always there for me
It healed me when I crumbled
It saw love through open eyes
It hugged the one’s I care for
Gave me peace from deep inside
So I’d like to tell you something
And I’d like to make it clear
If not for you dear, Linda
I would simply not be here
With Love
A Poem For My Body
I am learning to accept and love my ageing body. Not an easy thing, I am so proud and vain, but I am on the right track.
dinghysailor1, 4 months ago
lovely work!
Barssel, 4 months ago
You are on the right track my friend and you know that I am very proud to call you my friend.
ltruskett in reply to Barssel’s comment, 4 months ago
Right back atchya! Thanks.
ltruskett in reply to dinghysailor1’s comment, 4 months ago
Thanks dinghysailor. :))))))))))
sandraellen, 4 months ago
just beautiful—-so wonderful to read. love it .sandra
Paul Vanzella
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4 months ago
just so well written and strikes the perfect tone – respect and admiration to you Linda!
ltruskett in reply to Paul Vanzella’s comment, 4 months ago
I appreciate your admiration immensley P. :))
ltruskett in reply to sandraellen’s comment, 4 months ago
Thanks so much sandra. Lovely of you to take the time to read and comment. Thanks. :))
Martin Scerri, 4 months ago
Lamenting yet joyful, a tribute to your beauty – past and present.
mychaelalchemy, 4 months ago
It is good you found body acceptance. In fact, I would rather accept your body than my own.
I am thankful for all the pleasures and joys mine had brought me, and, I know I was the one who allowed the construction (or de-construction) of this vessel I call home. And, although I cannot claim the wear and tear from bearing a child, I was a sperm donor and had a delightful affect on another’s body which gave me my own fine son.
A few have told me outright that I look pregnant…I reply, “I’m carrying my inner child”
sword, 4 months ago
I am not one for poetry,but i must admit this is awonderful piece…everything is relitive,your so called ageing body looks pretty good to me…When i was younger my wife used to say to me you are to pretty.I am now just pretty awful.But getting old has never been something i dreaded as long as we are both fit and healthy that is much more important…keep the brilliant photos coming
Steven Torrisi, 4 months ago
You are the wordsmith aren’t you. A wonderful tribute to the female landscape that is you. You should do some writing and commit to paper more to compliment the photography.
Lawford, 4 months ago
A recorder of thoughts and images. Double talent. Nicely written.
ltruskett in reply to Martin Scerri’s comment, 4 months ago
Thank you Martin. I felt the need to thank myself for a change. :))
ltruskett in reply to mychaelalchemy’s comment, 4 months ago
Love the ‘inner child’ reply, very clever comeback. Probably some truth to it as well….....and thanks for accepting my body too…..everyone craves acceptance…....lol. ;))
ltruskett in reply to sword’s comment, 4 months ago
Let me agree wholeheartedly about the ‘health’ comment. It is just the curse of most women, I think, to mourn the passing of their youthful beauty. I know, I know, it is then replaced by a mature beauty…..........but that sucks…........lol. Thanks Sword. :)))))
ltruskett in reply to Steven Torrisi’s comment, 4 months ago
Well, maybe I caught a virus off you….........lol. I always have written poetry, but to be honest with you, I am not that big a fan. Strange, contradictory thing to say, probably. However, from time to time, I go for it. And also, there are so many talented poets (including you) on RB, how could you not be inspired. Thanks buddy. :)))
ltruskett in reply to Lawford’s comment, 4 months ago
I like that Lawford…....’a recorder of thoughts and images’. Yeah, I like that. Thanks. :)))
Maximus, 4 months ago
Excellent work. As an elderly friend says “getting old isn’t all it’s cracked up to be. “
Max :)
ltruskett, 4 months ago
So right…........thanks Maximus. :))
mychaelalchemy, 4 months ago
my inner child still wants to breast feed
ltruskett in reply to mychaelalchemy’s comment, 4 months ago
Your’e too late.
Nancy Fischer, 3 months ago
Love the rhythm and the honor you are showing yourself here. Beautiful writing Linda.
ltruskett in reply to Nancy Fischer’s comment, 3 months ago
Thanks so much Nancy. Love it when women love what I do. :)))
Kelli Maier, 3 months ago
I don’t think much about my body…I let my husband worry about it. But this is empowering for all women. You are an honest writer…that is wonderful.
ltruskett in reply to Kelli Maier’s comment, 3 months ago
Thank you Kelli. Love the input. :))
fireandice, 2 months ago
This could be the story of any woman and as I read it, I saw images that could fit the poem..
Beautiful and remarkable poem..
ltruskett in reply to fireandice’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks so very much FAD, glad u saw those images, yes I agree a lot of women would probably relate to this…...........thanks again. :O))
Gary Crandall, 2 months ago
I have lain beside “women of a certain age”, Linda… and their body’s, though seasoned, are still very beautiful because they fill the nights with indescribable passion and a sense of Old World soul that only comes with time and experience… that, to me, is what your poem celebrates…
ltruskett, 2 months ago
Thanks Gary, that is really, really nice….......cheers, Linda…..... :O))
lallymac, about 1 month ago
Wonderful poem!
ltruskett in reply to lallymac’s comment, about 1 month ago
Thank you very much lallymac. :))
Ash rebeltherace, about 1 month ago
brilliant
i can only hope that when i am a woman
i can love and respect my body as much as you do
your an inspiration, you truly are
ltruskett in reply to Ash rebeltherace’s comment, about 1 month ago
Thanks beautiful….....you will be a magnificent woman…....